Ashes

The cafe burnt alive as soon as you
Set your patent leather boot inside
And walked right into this unknown,
Mysterious yet familiar world 
Of witty writers and pious poets
With their poetic pens.
My tantalizing timid eyes 
Met your musically amused eyes,
And I heard a symphony unsung,
Strange, how can you be just a stranger,
When your eyes can speak so much danger,
Then how much your heart would want to say, stranger. 
Strangers don't sing symphonies, 
Nor do they linger nostalgically 
Like a locket on an ashen neck. 
They don't even say hello,
And there I sat with my cold heart,
Wondering like a bashful bard,
What were the chances,
Those burning glances,
And you left aloofly 
With your latte
Leaving the ashes behind. 
Soot everywhere,
Here and there,
On my lips where
Your eyes lingered,
On my fingertips,
Wanting to write 
The desires of the
Waltzing, woozy heart. 
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Date: 7/7/2025 3:36:00 PM
Dear Anne, a belated big congratulations on POTW! I loved reading this so well written poem. I also loved the flow, the heartbeat and having no stanza’s enhanced this. You set a vivid scene that draws the attention immediately as the poem flames with passion and longing and concludes with smouldering ashes. Desires indeed of the “Waltzing, woozy heart”. A well deserved recognition. Blessings and smiles to you xx
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Date: 7/7/2025 5:57:00 PM
Dear Christina, thank you so much for your kind words and congratulations! I'm thrilled to have been recognized for the Poem of the Week. Your thoughtful feedback and blessings mean a lot to me. I appreciate you, dear friend! :)
Date: 7/1/2025 12:26:00 AM
Biggest , belated and well deserved Congratulations Anne on POTW! A truly captivating write my friend! Debx
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Date: 7/1/2025 6:02:00 AM
Thank you so much dear friend! I appreciate you :)
Date: 6/22/2025 8:46:00 AM
a deep and intricately written poem..one worthy of POTW
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Date: 6/23/2025 7:32:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 6/20/2025 6:53:00 AM
I had that same experience with a spider web once....beautifully written in the silky spider web way...smooth, yet tinged with danger and passion. congrats on POTW...WELL DESERVED.
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Date: 6/20/2025 10:18:00 PM
Dear John, thank you so much for your lovely note. I appreciate you, dear friend. Best, Anne
Date: 6/18/2025 4:14:00 AM
Superb portrayal of a magical vibrational connect. Warmest congratulations on POTW, Anne
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Date: 6/18/2025 6:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear friend. I appreciate your lovely note :)
Date: 6/17/2025 5:55:00 PM
Dear Anne, your words hold depth and meaning. So deserving to be in the spotlight all week. Congratulations my sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 6/18/2025 6:45:00 PM
Dear Brandy, what a joy it is to read your lovely notes, I appreciate you. Thank you so much :)
Date: 6/17/2025 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on Poem of the Week, Anne Winter! Chills of desires flowing into a staccato cadence which makes my heart throb and fingers snap. A "Rogers and Heart" composition of melancholy aspects of love. Charming~
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Date: 6/18/2025 6:43:00 PM
Ahh!! Your comment is so wonderful! Thank you so much, dear friend, I'm so grateful :)
Date: 6/17/2025 7:53:00 AM
- A wonderful poem with emotion, Anne ... congratulations on your p.o.t.w. ... enjoy your week :) - hugs
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Date: 6/18/2025 6:42:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, thank you so much! I'm so grateful :)
Date: 6/16/2025 12:33:00 PM
Great alliteration, especially the ending 'Waltzing, woozy heart." Congrats on your POTD and thanks for sharing.
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Date: 6/17/2025 5:21:00 AM
Dear Benjamin, thank you so much! I appreciate you :)
Date: 6/16/2025 7:41:00 AM
Dearest Anne, Look at you, my dear poet friend and getting POTW! I am so proud of you and I stand and applaud. Congratulations! Spring Blessings, and Hugs, My Dearest Anne, Daniel
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Date: 6/16/2025 7:53:00 AM
Dearest Daniel, your kind words and encouragement mean the world to me. Thank you so much for always cheering for me, I truly appreciate you! Thank you for being my Mrs Dagenhart, my dearest friend. With love and respect always, Anne
Date: 6/16/2025 1:02:00 AM
Engaging poetry Anne, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the week… Beryl
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Date: 6/16/2025 7:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear poet :)
Date: 6/15/2025 9:19:00 AM
I enjoyed this a lot Anne. Smouldering elegance. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 6/16/2025 7:54:00 AM
Dear Linda, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, thank you so much! :)
Date: 6/15/2025 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your write. Great Ending... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win............
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Date: 6/16/2025 7:54:00 AM
Dear Paula, I'm glad you liked my poem, thank you so much!
Date: 6/15/2025 6:12:00 AM
congrats on your POTW designation. Love your poetic voice and style exemplified in this moving poem. Yellow Rose
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Date: 6/16/2025 7:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear poet! I appreciate you! :)
Date: 6/15/2025 5:40:00 AM
Hey Anne enjoy your special week in the spotlight
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Date: 6/16/2025 7:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Tom, I appreciate you :)
Date: 6/15/2025 3:49:00 AM
What a lovely unique style you have! Congratulations on potw!
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Date: 6/16/2025 7:56:00 AM
Dear Karen, thank you so much for your lovely note! :)
Date: 6/14/2025 5:56:00 AM
A curious beginning… the musicality, symphony… Leaving the ashes behind. Soot everywhere, Here and there, On my lips… Enjoyed this write! Fave
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Date: 6/15/2025 3:03:00 AM
Dear Kim, I love reading your lovely notes, I truly appreciate you! Best, Anne
Date: 6/14/2025 1:05:00 AM
Hi Anne,what a smoldering, evocative poem — it reads like a memory set aflame. The imagery is rich with romantic tension and poetic melancholy. I especially love how the poem plays with contrasts: fire and ash, mystery and familiarity, silence and symphony. There's a haunting beauty in the way the stranger's presence lingers long after they're gone, like soot in the soul. Truly atmospheric and emotionally stirring — it captures that fleeting moment of connection that feels eternal...Hugs
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Date: 6/15/2025 3:02:00 AM
Dear Maria, I'm so glad how you deeply understood my poem. I appreciate your lovely words. I'm very grateful that you stopped by and read my poem. Best, Anne
Date: 6/13/2025 6:38:00 PM
What a breath of fresh poem this is. Your free verse style reminds me somewhat of my own. You deliver, Annie Deliver Winner, really enjoyed. Be blessed ... CayCay
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Date: 6/15/2025 2:59:00 AM
Dear CayCay, I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem, I'm glad my free verse style resonates with your style. I appreciate you. Sending you love, Anne
Date: 6/13/2025 5:22:00 PM
in the intimacy of the cafe, this is brilliant and moving, so impressive poem have a nice week end
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Date: 6/15/2025 2:58:00 AM
Dear Yann, your kind words mean a lot, I appreciate you :)
Date: 6/13/2025 2:44:00 PM
Hello Anne, this is a brilliant piece, beautifully executed and an excellent read. Wishing you a wonderful weekend my poet friend.
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Date: 6/15/2025 2:57:00 AM
Dear Zyrool, thank you so much! I appreciate your comments! Have a wonderful day :)
Date: 6/13/2025 4:39:00 AM
Amazing isn't it, Anne, what a look can do sometimes, but we definitely don't know exactly what the person is thinking. Thanks for sharing this amazingly creative work with us. Sara K
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Date: 6/13/2025 7:08:00 AM
Thank you, Sara! I love how a single look can spark so much imagination and connection. While most of the time we cannot know what a person is thinking, sometimes the eyes can reveal what words can't. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, and I appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts.
Date: 6/12/2025 11:27:00 PM
Your poetry is aflame with emotion and your brilliant alliterations sent up that café alight whilst the coffee latte spreads its delicious aroma. Your desire to write is embedded in your heart where even poetry can be written with soot. Your metaphors engage our hearts and makes your poem shine. Blessings.
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Date: 6/13/2025 7:02:00 AM
Dear Victor, thank you so much for your beautiful and imaginative response! Your words mean a lot and I'm grateful for your kind encouragement. Your description of my poetry is a gift in itself :)
Date: 6/12/2025 6:12:00 PM
' Strangers don't sing symphonies. ' Seems that way, yet hearts connect instantly. So many emotions tangle through your words Anne. You're truly a gifted writer. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 6/13/2025 7:00:00 AM
Dear Brandy, your sweet words have warmed my heart. Thank you for being such a kind and supportive friend. I'm grateful for our connection and the joy of sharing words with you. Hugs back at you, my sweet friend :)
Date: 6/12/2025 6:15:00 AM
Haha! This fantasy came and went like a summer storm. No memories to be shared, just dust and ashes. Still, she had a moment. Nice write anne
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Date: 6/13/2025 6:58:00 AM
Dear Tom, she indeed had a moment haha! No memories but only dust and ashes. Thank you for reading my poem :)
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