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ARE YOU SITTING COMFORTABLY
Poor Beryl had terrible piles So painful, they stuck out for miles With help from her finger Her piles did not linger Now comfy, she sits there and smiles! N/A In enter your own contest contest Contest finalised on 9/24 A Poem, I Wrote and Sent Drifting - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Broken Wings 09-22-17

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Date: 10/13/2017 5:08:00 AM
Blessings and heart-felt congratulations on your win, Jan - wonderful work and well-earned, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/13/2017 1:38:00 PM
Thanks Greg, not everyone appreciates my humour!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/11/2017 10:47:00 PM
Congratulations, Jan on your win.
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Date: 10/12/2017 6:25:00 AM
Thanks Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/11/2017 8:55:00 PM
Jan, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful limerick !
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Date: 10/12/2017 6:24:00 AM
Thanks for the chance to show the poem Constance it failed to place in 2 contests so I am delighted with my win:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/11/2017 6:19:00 PM
Hilarious! Congrats on your win, Jan!
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Date: 10/11/2017 6:22:00 PM
I submitted it to 2 contests and failed to place so I am most grateful to Constance for the second chance contest:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/29/2017 1:38:00 PM
You are so wonderful at writing these Limericks Jan! A real hoot. I have only written one in my entire life. I am amazed at how many you have written. Keep entertaining us! : )
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Date: 9/29/2017 5:26:00 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by Connie I have had such wonderful comments on this poem i personally think its one of my best limericks. I will continue to try and make people laugh and tomorrow I am taking part in Manx Litfest and will be performing 2 of my poems, one humourous the other one is the Lowest of the Low which is a serious poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/25/2017 4:05:00 AM
Brilliant Jan, all your Limericks are exceedingly good but like you I think this certainly goes to the top. :)))))
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Date: 9/25/2017 4:09:00 AM
Thanks Roy:-) :-) I personally think its my best ever but it's failed to place in 2 recent contests lol- I guess contests are also like piles ... a pain in the butt!!!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/24/2017 4:30:00 PM
That's the perfect Limerick, Makes me sit a little uncomfortably though, regards, Kevin
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Date: 9/24/2017 4:36:00 PM
lol Kevin I personally think its one of my best ever:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/23/2017 9:43:00 PM
I love this, Jan, I like this much better than the other entry .. a winner already.. Luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`* .
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Date: 9/24/2017 2:55:00 AM
Thanks Eve :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2017 8:35:00 AM
This is skillfully-written and funny, Jan! Janice
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Date: 9/23/2017 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Janice I think its one of my very best limericks:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/23/2017 8:33:00 AM
Piling on the laughs..Nicely done Jan
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Date: 9/23/2017 1:21:00 PM
ha ha ha great comment Jospeh:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/23/2017 7:15:00 AM
And I think you did a fabulous job! You are the Queen! Hugs Kim
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Date: 9/23/2017 7:18:00 AM
aww thanks Kim I think this is my best limerick ever and i have had such positive comments. I hadn't thought of a way of entering Cecilia's contest but Dales comment made me think i should enter this one:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/23/2017 4:28:00 AM
Strikingly humorous, Jan! Luckily I have never experienced piles, but can't say the same for getting pricked! Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/23/2017 5:31:00 AM
LOl Paul, I personally think its one of my best ever limericks and I am so delighted with the comments I've received!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/22/2017 9:47:00 PM
Lol! You done good
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Date: 9/23/2017 5:31:00 AM
Cheers Mike:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2017 8:58:00 PM
hahaha. And the picture with it is GREAT. yes, Jan, you are the winner of your limerick contest. FAVE
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Date: 9/23/2017 5:33:00 AM
I have come a long way since I wrote my first poem Andrea and I wish I could fave this one as I think its my best one ever:-) thanks for the fave, that means a lot to me:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2017 6:24:00 PM
Beryl please do not despair.... you can visit my home and poo there...... come give it a try.....it will wash and blow dry.....put a smile only you know where.. well done Jan i love it....Seren fav
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Date: 9/22/2017 6:37:00 PM
ha ha ha Seren that is hilariarse:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/22/2017 6:09:00 PM
Hi Jan , piles and constipation at the same time ::(( wow no fun in that my friend ,,,great write sooo funny wonderful Limerick ::)))) hugs
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Date: 9/22/2017 6:36:00 PM
lol Niall I do worry about my muse but think this is my best limerick ever :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/22/2017 2:51:00 PM
You are a funny lady, Jan! This should be printed in a magazine of limericks, it's that good. The 2nd line is the funniest. Made my day. We're just feeling the final winds of hurricane Jose. We escaped all serious damage. / M
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Date: 9/22/2017 5:55:00 PM
Brilliant that you escaped the hurricane and your comment on my poem has absolutely made my day! I personally think its one of my best ever limericks so I am delighted you like it so much too:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/22/2017 1:33:00 PM
OMG, this is too much!, very funny ! I don't want to ask from where the inspiration arose.
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Date: 9/22/2017 1:42:00 PM
It actually arose from a conversation with my mother lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2017 12:23:00 PM
That would be quite the painful interlude to have this happen! I really enjoyed reading your wondrous sense of humor limerick this fine afternoon my friend! You have successfully done what you sent out to do...you put a smile on my face! Great Work!!
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Date: 9/22/2017 12:42:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Russell did you read it to Emma? I would love her thoughts on it lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2017 10:33:00 AM
Oh Thanks Jan, needed the laugh. clever limerick too!
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Date: 9/22/2017 12:41:00 PM
Thanks Harry i don't take humour sitting down lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2017 10:19:00 AM
OH my word! Outdone yourself this time. Not sitting so comfortably now, just fell out of my chair ;) hilarious dear! xomo!
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Date: 9/22/2017 12:40:00 PM
Aww thanks Mo I'm glad i made you giggle:-) I think this is one of my favourite limericks I wish i could add it to my faves as it sure makes me smile!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/22/2017 9:37:00 AM
The prickly pear sat over in that chair...coy smile to make you disappear...thoughts of rhyme and pace...judge with stoic face...ignorance of the rules so unfair
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Date: 9/22/2017 9:52:00 AM
Great reply Tim:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2017 9:34:00 AM
Ah! The good old Limerick. Liked this one Jan. The title reminded me of BBC children's programme that always started with these words, followed by: then I'll begin. Take care. Tony x
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Date: 9/22/2017 9:51:00 AM
We are showing our age Tony lol it was called 'Listen with Mother' and that is where I got the idea for the title :-):-) !!! Your comment has made my day!!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2017 9:04:00 AM
Very funny and perfectly written.
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Date: 9/23/2017 4:09:00 AM
YOUR comment spurred me on to enter Cecilia's contest, thanks for boosting my confidence:-):-) I do consider it one of my best ever limericks:-) hugs jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/22/2017 9:10:00 AM
I can write the odd decent limerick but I know not everyone appreciates them lol lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2017 8:55:00 AM
Lol! Ouch, this is funny:-)Alexis
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Alexis Y.
Date: 9/22/2017 1:17:00 PM
Lol. Isn't that the truth:-) Alexis
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/22/2017 9:10:00 AM
not if you have piles its not lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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