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April's Come

April’s come with amber rays. On my lawn a gilded glaze soon she will be leaving me. Days of gray away will flee! Spring brings light I love the most. It’s like butter on my toast. Easing onto spring comes dawn; with such hope to her I’m drawn. I behold the morning sun behind my house. Then I run just to see as sunlight spills over my yard’s daffodils. It’s like a plenitude of honey from the sky. I love memories of spring I hold when April spreads dawns of gold. April 13, 2023 For Emile Pinet's Write A Jueju-Qijue Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/24/2023 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Emile's contest. Way to go. Creative work for sure. It has good rhythm, flow and rhyme. Sara
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Date: 5/22/2023 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea! Your poem “ April's Come” earned a distinguished place in my Jueju-Qijue contest. You should be proud of your placing, many good poems were submitted, yet yours caught my eye, well done, my friend, Emile.
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Date: 5/10/2023 10:47:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this delightful string of quatrains in honor of spring. I'm going into fall with all its rich colors. :)
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Date: 4/15/2023 10:08:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in this interesting form Andrea. All best in Emile's contest! :)
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Date: 4/13/2023 5:03:00 PM
I liked the movement the poem, the sun proceeding across the lawn. Uplifting Spring poem, Andrea. Good luck in the contest! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 4/13/2023 9:31:00 AM
Very nice springtime poem, Andrea. Great to see you this morning.
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Date: 4/13/2023 9:17:00 AM
I enjoyed your "April's Come" write. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 4/13/2023 8:17:00 AM
Much enjoyed the inspiring voice of your poem, Andrea. April spread dawns of gold--awesome!
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Date: 4/13/2023 6:45:00 AM
What a joyful poem , embracing all the beauty around us : ). Love it
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