Ants

Ants work like busy little bees,
pilling sand up in the breeze.
They work with great ease,
are they on their knees.
Even when there is a freeze,
the ants are out under the trees.
Building a house to store their cheese,
I guess their door has very small keys.
I would love to come in Louise,
can I if I say pretty please.
Date Written: 1/15/2022
1 Place
A STRAND (1066) Contest Judged:2/5/2022
 
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
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Date: 2/12/2022 12:33:00 PM
Hi! Paula Back to say Congratulations on your win. Hugs ~ Debra
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/13/2022 9:15:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Have a blessed day/week to come writing away.............
Date: 2/5/2022 1:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You deserve it with this exquisitely crafted poem about ants—kindest regards, dear friend.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/6/2022 8:14:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win with this fun Ant write. Have a blessed day/week writing away.............
Date: 1/16/2022 12:13:00 AM
This is indeed quite cute... !"I guess their door has very small keys." Love this line considering the size of the ants. Good luck in the contest Paula !
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/16/2022 12:30:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Oh yes, very small keys in deed. Ant size. Have a blessed day/week writing away.............
Date: 1/15/2022 4:53:00 PM
A cute entry for the contest Paula. Blessings xxoo
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/16/2022 12:28:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my ants. They are hard workers. Have a blessed day/week writing away.............
Date: 1/15/2022 2:25:00 PM
A really clever little poem on ants, Paula. I enjoyed it immensely. Nothing better I like than watching ants at work.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/16/2022 12:27:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my ant story/write. Watching ants at work can be so much fun. Have a blessed day/week writing away.............
Date: 1/15/2022 1:23:00 PM
That's a cute poem, I love the rhyming pattern.....Blessings ~ Debra
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/16/2022 12:25:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this rhyme/write. Have a blessed day/week writing away.............
Date: 1/15/2022 1:20:00 PM
Sweet story book feel.....very clever. Blessings, Paulette
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/16/2022 12:24:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Yes, it could go into a story book. Have a blessed day/week writing away.............
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