Ants

Ants work like busy little bees, pilling sand up in the breeze. They work with great ease, are they on their knees. Even when there is a freeze, the ants are out under the trees. Building a house to store their cheese, I guess their door has very small keys. I would love to come in Louise, can I if I say pretty please. Date Written: 1/15/2022 1 Place A STRAND (1066) Contest Judged:2/5/2022 Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Debra L Brown

Date: 2/12/2022 12:33:00 PM

Hi! Paula Back to say Congratulations on your win. Hugs ~ Debra

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/13/2022 9:15:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Have a blessed day/week to come writing away.............

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/5/2022 1:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. You deserve it with this exquisitely crafted poem about ants—kindest regards, dear friend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/6/2022 8:14:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win with this fun Ant write. Have a blessed day/week writing away.............

Valsa George

Date: 1/16/2022 12:13:00 AM

This is indeed quite cute... !"I guess their door has very small keys." Love this line considering the size of the ants. Good luck in the contest Paula !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/16/2022 12:30:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Oh yes, very small keys in deed. Ant size. Have a blessed day/week writing away.............

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/15/2022 4:53:00 PM

A cute entry for the contest Paula. Blessings xxoo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/16/2022 12:28:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my ants. They are hard workers. Have a blessed day/week writing away.............

L Milton Hankins

Date: 1/15/2022 2:25:00 PM

A really clever little poem on ants, Paula. I enjoyed it immensely. Nothing better I like than watching ants at work.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/16/2022 12:27:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my ant story/write. Watching ants at work can be so much fun. Have a blessed day/week writing away.............

Debra L Brown

Date: 1/15/2022 1:23:00 PM

That's a cute poem, I love the rhyming pattern.....Blessings ~ Debra

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/16/2022 12:25:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this rhyme/write. Have a blessed day/week writing away.............

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/15/2022 1:20:00 PM

Sweet story book feel.....very clever. Blessings, Paulette

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/16/2022 12:24:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Yes, it could go into a story book. Have a blessed day/week writing away.............