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Angst and Peace In August

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It's a new day and a fresh start. The morning will shortly arise. The evening's curtain will rise. The vast vault of the sky begins to impart Dazzling stars shine in the dark sky. The crescent moon looks bright. As the clock strikes midnight, Storms are heading west, spry. That wet earth smells wonderful. Lightning is bursting in the vicinity. Dark clouds gather above infinity. Rain pelts the sky like a thunder hill. Our August celebration is quite new. In August, I wonder if it's a sign for me and you.
Written: August 08, 2022 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 11 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mark Toney

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Date: 8/9/2022 4:42:00 PM
Nice imagery and a welcome August poem. We could use some rain here in Texas. Have a great week! Bill
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Date: 8/9/2022 5:38:00 AM
Wonderful imagery Lasaad. A new day and fresh start always conjures inspiration.
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Date: 8/8/2022 8:53:00 PM
A beautiful sonnet, dear Lasaad ! A fresh day and a beautiful night adorned by the cresent moon and stars. With midnight, rain pelting down ! The changing phases of Nature are viewed through the eyes of a poet ! All the Best in the contest!
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Date: 8/8/2022 7:18:00 PM
I like this a lot, Lasaad. I hope it gets you a lap in the marathon. Best wishes!
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Date: 8/8/2022 7:39:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words, Milt; I'm delighted that you enjoy it; but, the contest has already ended; perhaps in the next one. Regards

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