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Angelic

And so it is, that both the Devil and the angelic Spirit present us with objects of desire to awaken our power of choice. There is an invisible strength within us; when it recognizes two opposing objects of desire, it grows stronger ( Rumi) She is an angelic Aphrodite, with thorns and thistles in her myrtle heart, disguised as a martyr veiled in burgundy blues, a savior in need of a lion armor. As the tainted world lured her to be the temptress of twilight, blindfolded by paper butterfly wings, handcuffed by porcelain pearls and lilac lace; she finds herself, searching for blood diamond truth to uncloak what grows beneath the orchid sun. She never promised that her peaking rays of spring would silence your storms. For she strolls obliviously, dressed in onyx winter, as she tastes of sinful summer evenings, wearing a crown of sublime sunflowers, too piercingly divine for unprepared eyes. She has constantly been shoved deep into an estuary of emotions, where turquoise ripples fade into blazing blue wisps of nothingness, among dimmed stars in the soul of midnight. If only she knew, not every spellbinding gaze meant "love" woven in threads of a thriving future; there’s always blistering agony brewing beneath constellations of fluttering gems, though she questions the silver light that radiates from the moon in her mind.

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Date: 3/29/2024 4:12:00 AM
Back here to congratulate you on your win dearest Ink.
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Date: 3/28/2024 8:58:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your amazing "Angelic" write again. What a picture. Have a blessed day.............
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Date: 3/22/2024 6:52:00 AM
Stunning with every line! You are an inspiration to sharing your poetry. A Fav for for me! Blessings Chantelle Anne
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Date: 3/20/2024 4:27:00 PM
Oh, wow, this was spellbinding- I felt like you were talking about me! Whoah...this is going into my favs-
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Date: 3/20/2024 1:42:00 PM
Tastes of sinful summer. I doubt it would taste nice. You always on point Ink. "If only she knew, not every spellbinding gaze meant "love" woven in threads of a thriving future" I really loved that line. She seems fun.
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Date: 3/20/2024 11:12:00 AM
She sounds very conflicted to me, i guess because I am seeing so many contrasts to her nature. I suppose not a person like myself, who would be very down to earth and easy to read. It's very profound, and I don't often do well interpreting that kind of poetry, but I really admire the beautiful images you convey. Always you excel with imagery!
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Date: 3/19/2024 10:23:00 AM
IE, we all have a bit of this conflict in our heart and soul. This poem could be interpreted on different levels. Is she, you, all of us, or just special people who have some wonderful appearance? There are so many expectations we can't suppress. They live in our unconscious mind. There's a constant struggle to understand what the world and others are communicating to us. I was listening to a show on NPR talking about how all communication tells us something if we are open and not threatened.
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Date: 3/17/2024 10:05:00 AM
Your "Angelic" is an amazing write. I love it... "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away..................
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Date: 3/17/2024 5:34:00 AM
"The temptress of twilight blindfolded by paper butterfly wings", Wonderful write
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Ink Empress
Date: 3/17/2024 7:28:00 AM
Thank you so much for your feedback
Date: 3/17/2024 1:55:00 AM
Dear Empress, this is a poem rich in imagery metaphor portraying the multifaceted complex nature of the speaker in a world full of pain and beauty. Enjoyed
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Date: 3/17/2024 7:30:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind and generous feedback im truly grateful for your support
Date: 3/16/2024 5:54:00 PM
Dearest Empress, I must say this is a captivating exploration of the human experience, piecing together themes of desire, choice, and self-discovery with exquisite imagery and amazing insight. I feel your artistic words strongly inviting reflection on the complexities of emotion and the quest for truth amidst illusion. Empress there is no doubt your poetic talent shines brightly, illuminating the path to understanding and acceptance. I really feel your artistry that touches the depths of the soul. A FAV for sure Empress! - Blessings, Daniel
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Ink Empress
Date: 3/17/2024 7:34:00 AM
Thank you so much dear daniel for your very detailed feedback and fave and i am grateful for readers like you that grasp little details of my metaphors and find meaning in my poems. Always appreciate your poetic presence
Date: 3/16/2024 5:17:00 PM
You captured my attention from the get-go, dear Ink. I felt the tension in the challenges the narrator faces such conflicting choices. Your imagery moved the story along in an exquisite manner. I felt a host of emotions and got lost in your magnificent words. Best wishes with the contest! hugs for the evening, Sara
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Date: 3/17/2024 7:35:00 AM
Thank you dear sara, for reading and for leaving your best wishes. Sending you light also. Always grateful for your support
Date: 3/16/2024 4:47:00 PM
I hope you entered this one in the contest, Inky. A FAV for my list, my friend. The imagery is your usual brilliant word painting, and the mystique was intriguing throughout your poem. I could fill the clash between the choices made as you navigated the river of life. The dangers and exhilaration of the rapids and the peace and calm of beautiful moments in nature. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Love and Light to show you the way, Bill
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Date: 3/17/2024 7:45:00 AM
Dear bill you and sara have been so supportve from the beginning of my journey here on soup, so very kind of you both, and your ability to grasp and understand the depth of my poem is truly appreciated, thank you so very much also for the fave. Im grateful always
Date: 3/16/2024 4:21:00 PM
so beautifulluy written, images are brilliant, great sonorities too, thanks for the enjoyable moment yann
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Date: 3/17/2024 7:55:00 AM
Dear yann i appreciate always your feedback and support, thank you so very much
Date: 3/16/2024 2:01:00 PM
Conflicts. Everyone experiences them. I love this poem. I feel the presence of strength within the angel.
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Date: 3/17/2024 7:56:00 AM
Awn thank you sweet hilda. I appreciate your support always
Date: 3/16/2024 1:03:00 PM
Power of your pen shines throughout, my friend--exploring the invisible strength within us. Beautiful vocabulary as always, Ink:--where turquoise ripples fade into blazing blue wisps of nothingness, among dimmed stars in the soul of midnight...
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Date: 3/17/2024 8:13:00 AM
Im always grateful for your poetic presence and uplifting comments, thank you for being so consistent with your support. I do appreciate it always
Date: 3/16/2024 10:46:00 AM
wow , your a poet that wins every time you pick up you pen to write, I ot lost in the magic of this, Ink :)
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Date: 3/17/2024 11:19:00 AM
Awwn thats such a sweet thing to say dear rose thank you so much for thinking so. I appreciate your kindness
Date: 3/16/2024 10:08:00 AM
"She never promised that her peaking rays of spring would silence your storms." The female aspect of creation, sought for comfort, blamed for failure...life meaningless without her blessed, endurance, beauty and grace. "She has constantly been shoved deep into an estuary of emotions, where turquoise ripples fade into blazing blue" Marvelous poetry! "though she questions the silver light that radiates from the moon in her mind. " Yes, we all do question our worth -- male and female of one being. -- "wisps of nothingness, among dimmed stars in the soul of midnight."
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Date: 3/17/2024 11:19:00 AM
Dear joe what a profound and detailed comment, its always so good when a reader feels and understand the depth of emotions conveyed in a poem, thank you so very much for your kindness. Im grateful
Date: 3/16/2024 8:20:00 AM
“She has constantly been shoved deep into an estuary of emotions, where turquoise ripples fade into blazing blue wisps of nothingness, among dimmed stars in the soul of midnight.” Dearest poetess your skill with word choice is presented perfectly in this beautiful poem! So many elegantly crafted phrases to adore like the last one “moon in mind”. You are simply brilliant! Thanks for sharing this gem!
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Date: 3/17/2024 11:20:00 AM
Awwn dear karen this truly made my soul warm and happy thank you so very much for such a beautiful comment, you are truly a poetic gem
Date: 3/16/2024 7:33:00 AM
She is an angelic Aphrodite, with thorns and thistles in her myrtle heart,… ooo the magical vibe!!! handcuffed by porcelain pearls and lilac lace.. oooo handcufff me papi!!! searching for blood diamond truth to uncloak what grows beneath the orchid sun…. Ooooo enchanted by the architecture for your lines papi… turquoise ripples fade into blazing blue wisps of nothingness,.. mmm blistering agony brewing beneath constellations of fluttering gems,… mmm I love how u make every line flow so effortlessly
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Date: 3/16/2024 7:24:00 AM
Interesting take on the quote and the angelic theme.. your poem intricately delves into the complexities of a woman's inner world, using vivid imagery and metaphors to depict her multifaceted nature and the challenges she faces in navigating love, desire, and self-discovery... The comparison of the woman to an "angelic Aphrodite" immediately establishes her as a figure of beauty and allure, yet the inclusion of "thorns and thistles in her myrtle heart" suggests a deeper complexity and vulnerability beneath her outward appearance. The juxtaposition of divine imagery with symbols of pain and protection, such as the "lion armor" and "thorns," creates a sense of paradox and contradiction, hinting at the woman's struggle to reconcile her inner turmoil with her outward facade...
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Date: 3/16/2024 7:25:00 AM
I felt your poem offers a profound exploration of the complexities of womanhood and the human experience, inviting readers to contemplate the illusions and realities that shape our lives and relationships.
Date: 3/16/2024 7:21:00 AM
Aaaah. So nice . As always .
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