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contest Angelic or Abandoned words

sponsor Constance La France

In a dreamer's dream of sleepy visions, my silence was found in its misty world as the motion of shadows passed into view In their midst was a glorious Angelic light of elegant airy refinement, that beckoned me forward with a siren's song of sweet haunting beauty that stirred an emotional madness rushing me to the edge of reality where my soul was stripped bare to its essence revealing the good and bad of my life's deeds as they were tossed about in an ethereal realm to be weighed and judgment made as to my relationship with eternity in my awakening, the dawn's soft glow was inviting

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Date: 9/12/2023 5:26:00 PM
Frederic, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest I love the music, Constance
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Date: 8/23/2023 10:40:00 AM
- Back with a well-deserved congratulations, Frederic :) - hugs
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Date: 8/20/2023 12:58:00 PM
Such an ethereal and heartfelt poem this is, i love the way you’ve used rhymes and the flow of your word weaving. Especially “ sirens song of sweet haunting beauty “ seamless alliterations there. Beautiful write. Loved this
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Date: 8/19/2023 12:20:00 PM
- A glorious Angelic light poem, Frederic :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - I wish you a happy weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 8/19/2023 7:43:00 AM
Dear Frederic, I read your 'sweet haunting' lines of beauty and enjoyed each one as much as I did Mantovanis' 'Stranger in Paradise.' What a great choice for your angelic verses.' I imagine dawn glowing, but dimmed in the presence of Angels.
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Date: 8/19/2023 7:30:00 AM
I am sincerely captivated by the sheer brilliance of this masterpiece, characterized by its refined language and flawless craftsmanship, both of which have deeply enthralled my spirit. There are numerous remarkable phrases to highlight, notably " In their midst was a glorious Angelic light" And "where my soul was stripped bare to its essence" Best of luck in the contest.
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