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I've somehow pondered about the rush of air; of how I could be lulled in billows, and yet, its stroke upon my flesh always eludes me... as if in midnight trailing, weeping in refrains, this cadence glides beyond streetlamps to my litanies, my expectations, to tears until I am drenched by its grayish mist. Like one rain-child, born with August in my veins, I become a listener of winds huffing on trees, the whistle swirls up down to the ground chasing the anguish that escapes my mouth: then to know my heart’s kept secret is cuddled deeply through the quiet hiss of darkness. Now I trace the reel of fleeting memory and sigh... lost in distant zones as wind chimes echo no more in spaces where I loved and still, live to love back--- with my hope rising into the vapor of refreshed morns. Originally Written 5/21/2019 Contest of Julia Ward: Favourite Poem from May, 2019 ~ Inspiration from The Wind Cries Mary - Jimi Hendrix Submitted 6/28/2019

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Date: 6/14/2019 3:21:00 AM
Nette, and first win in this, what a beauty, an absolutely charming poem and a delightful read. Congrats dear friend! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/7/2019 7:59:00 AM
- Congratulations, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/6/2019 9:07:00 PM
Loved this Nette you never disappoint, congrats on another win!
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Date: 6/6/2019 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations for your top win Nette :)
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Date: 6/6/2019 11:30:00 AM
Nette, I enjoyed this deep write on memories of wind chimes...Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/1/2019 9:20:00 AM
I like this, Nette-- nicely done!
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Date: 5/23/2019 7:55:00 PM
Hi nette: I was overwhelmed by your interpretation of the melody. I wish you good luck and hugs!
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Date: 5/22/2019 6:48:00 PM
Hi. Just to let you know I changed the name of my poem to the 'Doppelganger Effect' based on your spot on comment. Thanks a bunch my friend. It was much better than the original title. Have a great day.
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Date: 5/22/2019 1:18:00 PM
- Jimi Hendrix would have been proud of this interpretation, Nette :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/22/2019 6:08:00 AM
Such delightful sights and sounds you created, Nette..wonderful chimes of memory..all the best.
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Date: 5/21/2019 11:46:00 PM
Jimi Hendrix, very inspirational stuff indeed, Nette, and you've done the man and his genius real justice with an excellent poem; great stuff.
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Date: 5/21/2019 8:12:00 PM
You always were a great listener, I can tell by the way you write, evoking beauty and charm, Well done Nette xo
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Date: 5/21/2019 8:08:00 PM
Elegant composition by a talented poet nette, ~~my best wishes, Aloha wk
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Date: 5/21/2019 7:28:00 PM
What magical and mysterious moments you create with your words, dear Nette! They evoke a plethora of feelings as my imagination catches that wind chime tune! Excellent and good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 5/21/2019 7:07:00 PM
One of my favorite fellow lefties...nice choice, Net Clouds...similar thinking today...high wind-gusts today & cold rain...but my garden plot (10/15) survives!
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Date: 5/21/2019 5:59:00 PM
Hello Nette, I love wind charms, the sound of them when the wind blows is a beautiful sound. have a nice day my friend.
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