An Old Woman's Saga of Life

She leaned on her stick like the Tower of Pisa
Her bones, porous and brittle, might break any day
She’s all alone, her husband dead and gone
Her only son, years before, shot down by a gun
Sombre shadows now darken her path

Still there is a rare glow in her eyes

When young lovers’ clasp and their fingers twine
She happily recalls the time she was with him
She lived a life of love, coloured in enduring tints
Looking back, she has no cause for remorse!
Her spine’s bent, unable to straighten itself

Still there is a rare glow in her eyes

She oft recounts her youth’s glitter and glow
That takes her back to life’s bygone splendour
She lived content, her tasks as wife and mother, fulfilled
Now she is a garment no longer fit to wear
Will soon be reaped by the scythe of fate

Still there is a rare glow in her eyes

Now that her days are numbered,
Before her, the sole image of a beauteous form
The loving hands of God waiting to embrace her 
This aged pilgrim focuses only on that goal in view
To the grave she quickly treads, never to return

And there is a rare glow in her eyes!

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Ashley Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 7:41 PM
Dear Valsa, your tender pen spills an intimate portrait of a soulful woman. The beauty of your imagery brings me to her world to admire the reasons for the rare glow in her eyes. Exquisite, elegant and emotional poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
George Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 11:54 PM
Thank you so much for your inspiring comment, Susan that I sadly missed . Your poetry as well as as our poetic comments inspire and thrill me. May golden thoughts keep flowing from your gifted pen....ever and ever.
Poet Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 6:22 AM
Though we all have to deal with the effects of aging, not everyone has to deal with it in the same way she has. With a peculiar sparkle in her eyes, you guided the construction of her portrait. Valsa, she is a role model for everyone.
George Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 9:15 PM
Old age is an inevitable reality, but very few will be able to face it the way she does. Glad Lassad, you admired the portrait of the old lady and thanks so much ! Stay blessed !
Wolf Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 3:57 PM
The eyes have it -- and hers have got it. She's ready for the long trip home. :) gw
George Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 8:07 PM
Yes, she is ready and has no regrets. How I wish I could be like her.. when I know that death is at my doorstep. Thank you friend !
Brown Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 1:07 PM
It's sad to see someone body get old but the spirt in side of them is still young. A very nice write. Blessings ~ Debra
George Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 8:05 PM
Very many thanks dear Debra for your sweet response !
Leffanta Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 9:45 AM
Watching that glow fade away is heavy . . . .
George Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 8:04 PM
That cannot be prevented ! Until then her eyes will emanate that glow. Thanks a lot Rico.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 9:39 AM
This is so unique and so positive despite the sad circumstances she found herself. A poem I enjoyed immensely. Merry Christmas.
George Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 8:02 PM
Yes, people with such positive attitude stimulate others and it is a joy seeing them. Thanks a lot Victor... !
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 5:25 AM
She is an inspiration to all, Valsa. Aging is inevitable, yet not all of us face it as she does. You built her portrait --leading the way--with a rare glow in her eyes.
George Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 7:48 AM
Only very few will be able to accept aging with such grace. Thank you Vijay for you to be charmed by the glow in her eyes.
Gentile Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 5:25 AM
Very beautiful verse Valsa! The internal glow never fades!! Happy Saturday!
George Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 7:50 AM
You are absolutely right Mike...Internal light can never be extinguished. Thanks a lot!
Daniel Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 5:17 AM
Reminds me of Anna, the prophetess, in the Bible, she lived her old age praising God in the temple, your old woman has a wonderful positive outlook on life:)
George Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 7:46 AM
Indeed.... that makes her stand out ! Her attitude is worthy of emulation . Thanks a lot Jo for your beautiful comment !
Rose  Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 4:34 AM
This aged pilgrim seemed to have acquired a beautiful soul, in fact so bright so bladed full of light, that there is a good possibility she learned all her lessons, and she will return as an orb of light to calm the oceans and the seas and extinguish darkness from the night, Love and hugs xo
George Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 7:43 AM
Yes, such lovely souls are twinkling stars to delight us and they will continue to inspire us even after they are gone. Thank you Rose for your lovely comment !
Cunningham Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 3:30 AM
A shame that we all have to get old, and quite sad when someone is left alone when they lose their partner. Enjoy your weekend Valsa.. Tom
George Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 3:45 AM
Indeed it is sad to be left alone.... but if one can live like this old woman with a cheerful disposition, life is a blessing even in old age. Thanks a lot Tom and wish you a happy weekend
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