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An Old Woman's Saga of Life

She leaned on her stick like the Tower of Pisa Her bones, porous and brittle, might break any day She’s all alone, her husband dead and gone Her only son, years before, shot down by a gun Sombre shadows now darken her path Still there is a rare glow in her eyes When young lovers’ clasp and their fingers twine She happily recalls the time she was with him She lived a life of love, coloured in enduring tints Looking back, she has no cause for remorse! Her spine’s bent, unable to straighten itself Still there is a rare glow in her eyes She oft recounts her youth’s glitter and glow That takes her back to life’s bygone splendour She lived content, her tasks as wife and mother, fulfilled Now she is a garment no longer fit to wear Will soon be reaped by the scythe of fate Still there is a rare glow in her eyes Now that her days are numbered, Before her, the sole image of a beauteous form The loving hands of God waiting to embrace her This aged pilgrim focuses only on that goal in view To the grave she quickly treads, never to return And there is a rare glow in her eyes! Placed First in the poetry Contest Strand's (1054) Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/21/2021 7:41:00 PM
Dear Valsa, your tender pen spills an intimate portrait of a soulful woman. The beauty of your imagery brings me to her world to admire the reasons for the rare glow in her eyes. Exquisite, elegant and emotional poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/14/2022 11:54:00 PM
Thank you so much for your inspiring comment, Susan that I sadly missed . Your poetry as well as as our poetic comments inspire and thrill me. May golden thoughts keep flowing from your gifted pen....ever and ever.
Date: 12/20/2021 6:22:00 AM
Though we all have to deal with the effects of aging, not everyone has to deal with it in the same way she has. With a peculiar sparkle in her eyes, you guided the construction of her portrait. Valsa, she is a role model for everyone.
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Date: 12/20/2021 9:15:00 PM
Old age is an inevitable reality, but very few will be able to face it the way she does. Glad Lassad, you admired the portrait of the old lady and thanks so much ! Stay blessed !
Date: 12/18/2021 3:57:00 PM
The eyes have it -- and hers have got it. She's ready for the long trip home. :) gw
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Date: 12/19/2021 8:07:00 PM
Yes, she is ready and has no regrets. How I wish I could be like her.. when I know that death is at my doorstep. Thank you friend !
Date: 12/18/2021 1:07:00 PM
It's sad to see someone body get old but the spirt in side of them is still young. A very nice write. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 12/19/2021 8:05:00 PM
Very many thanks dear Debra for your sweet response !
Date: 12/18/2021 9:45:00 AM
Watching that glow fade away is heavy . . . .
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Date: 12/19/2021 8:04:00 PM
That cannot be prevented ! Until then her eyes will emanate that glow. Thanks a lot Rico.
Date: 12/18/2021 9:39:00 AM
This is so unique and so positive despite the sad circumstances she found herself. A poem I enjoyed immensely. Merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/19/2021 8:02:00 PM
Yes, people with such positive attitude stimulate others and it is a joy seeing them. Thanks a lot Victor... !
Date: 12/18/2021 5:25:00 AM
Very beautiful verse Valsa! The internal glow never fades!! Happy Saturday!
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Date: 12/18/2021 7:50:00 AM
You are absolutely right Mike...Internal light can never be extinguished. Thanks a lot!
Date: 12/18/2021 5:25:00 AM
She is an inspiration to all, Valsa. Aging is inevitable, yet not all of us face it as she does. You built her portrait --leading the way--with a rare glow in her eyes.
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Date: 12/18/2021 7:48:00 AM
Only very few will be able to accept aging with such grace. Thank you Vijay for you to be charmed by the glow in her eyes.
Date: 12/18/2021 5:17:00 AM
Reminds me of Anna, the prophetess, in the Bible, she lived her old age praising God in the temple, your old woman has a wonderful positive outlook on life:)
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Date: 12/18/2021 7:46:00 AM
Indeed.... that makes her stand out ! Her attitude is worthy of emulation . Thanks a lot Jo for your beautiful comment !
Date: 12/18/2021 4:34:00 AM
This aged pilgrim seemed to have acquired a beautiful soul, in fact so bright so bladed full of light, that there is a good possibility she learned all her lessons, and she will return as an orb of light to calm the oceans and the seas and extinguish darkness from the night, Love and hugs xo
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Date: 12/18/2021 7:43:00 AM
Yes, such lovely souls are twinkling stars to delight us and they will continue to inspire us even after they are gone. Thank you Rose for your lovely comment !
Date: 12/18/2021 3:30:00 AM
A shame that we all have to get old, and quite sad when someone is left alone when they lose their partner. Enjoy your weekend Valsa.. Tom
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Date: 12/18/2021 3:45:00 AM
Indeed it is sad to be left alone.... but if one can live like this old woman with a cheerful disposition, life is a blessing even in old age. Thanks a lot Tom and wish you a happy weekend

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