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An Immutable World Come softly to the immutable world of a loved one with Alzheimer's disease where one memory is as precious pearl and the process of is no longer ease Bereft of all time, knowledge, place and self demurely calm with mood controlling drugs victims of a formidable foe of stealth, surer hands guide the tenuous with love. Remember that our fragile minds are brittle. Recall shatters with each passing interlude. As moments fly we can think of very little that just happen right before us in our view. Close your eyes when you visit someone next. Now name all the things in the room of red. You’ll see that you cannot create that sketch and be shocked by what does not stay in your head. 11/2/17 'STRAND CHOICE E Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 11/4/2017 11:29:00 AM
Really enjoyed this read, well done Janice, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 11/4/2017 8:46:00 AM
Well done, Janis. Congrats.
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Date: 11/2/2017 10:15:00 AM
Deep and touching write ... Best wishes for success in the contest ...
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