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Amid the Feeble Dimness

In the midst of midnight croon laden with stars, the sky bends refracting light into a spectrum of drifting colour mystique blithe. Beauteous in a wilderness amid the feeble dimness of old mossy leafless boughs; owls and other creatures rouse into emptiness of the night. They step out of the shadows beneath the old resting maple, flickering candlelight in hand, and fall to their knees on soften crackle of dry leaves; a trifle eerie. A sudden gust of wind, a chill, reap and thresh, a tortured flesh, kneeling in credence with mournful din. Penance will never end for sin in the dark hour struggle and shame. 11/29/2019

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Date: 12/27/2019 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Very meaningful ...
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Date: 12/13/2019 5:09:00 AM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in John's Free Verse contest, Eve - he knows his stuff! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :o) <3
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Date: 12/13/2019 2:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win in John's contest Eve. You already know how much I enjoyed this gem! : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/11/2019 7:22:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Eve
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Date: 12/11/2019 10:34:00 AM
This is really well done Eve, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 12/5/2019 6:15:00 PM
Eve congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful poem!
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Date: 12/4/2019 12:52:00 PM
- Dear Eve, congratulations so much on your top winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/4/2019 3:16:00 AM
Wow Eve, this is profoundly moving and beautiful! Congratulations on your deserving First Placement. I loved the mystery and depth of this write. : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/3/2019 8:26:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Eve
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Date: 12/3/2019 6:43:00 PM
powerful write, so skillfully penned Eve...congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Date: 12/3/2019 2:24:00 PM
Eve, lovely poetic intention applied here. No wonder you placed so highly! Congratulations on another fine placement, your skills shine so.
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Date: 12/3/2019 11:52:00 AM
Eve congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 12/1/2019 3:50:00 PM
Wow... Extreme... powerful... exciting... scary.... wonderfully written. Ann
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Date: 11/29/2019 8:09:00 PM
And so now Eve I've read your last poem submitted. Truly wonderful. I like the use of sonorous sounds that make a poem bounce. Thanks so much.
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Date: 11/29/2019 4:03:00 PM
Well written Eve! This is amazing :)
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Date: 11/29/2019 10:37:00 AM
Nicely flowing verse, Eve. The first stanza is beautiful.
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Date: 11/29/2019 10:35:00 AM
A brilliant verse you've composed Eve, best of luck. Tom
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Date: 11/29/2019 8:54:00 AM
Wow, this was really deep my friend. Beautifully written Eve, your talent has penned a winner in my opinion. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 11/29/2019 2:46:00 AM
Hi Eve well done my friend. I will be back to congratulate you. Thanks for sharing
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