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Am I Not Human

A Monoku by: Ink Empress The ink of my skin doesn't define me nor does it construe my poetry. Am I not human to your eyes? Do you not see my soul inside that streaky mirror of yours ? Have you forgotten, that I have a story too? Beneath the canopy of heaven God has Bisqued me and left you white, some he even inked them yellow. We each have our own unique skin tone, bone is bone I wasn't meant to be alone. Bigotry is not acceptable in a world where our heritage is something we are born in, not something we chose. Love me as if I were your neighbor, treat me as a brother a sister, for I hunger just like you and I dream just like you Am I not human to your eyes? When you look at the color of my skin, do you see me, ...as your next of kin? By: Mystic Rose

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Date: 10/7/2023 5:05:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Rose, on your POTW honour. Glad I did not miss this deep and powerful write! You have addressed a very strong question, and expressed your message loud and clear! Love and Hugs, Dear Poetess.
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Date: 10/5/2023 8:57:00 PM
Wow. That was deep, simple and it stirred my soul.
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Date: 10/5/2023 5:23:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem of great meaning sweet Rose…..Congratulations on POTW….truly deserved! Debx
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Date: 10/5/2023 1:41:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.w., Vie Rose :) - Beautiful written :) - hugs
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Date: 10/4/2023 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. A powerful write. I have been off the computer for 3 weeks. Now back to writing.  Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 10/3/2023 9:19:00 PM
Big Congratulations on POTW. A well deserved honour. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/3/2023 3:18:00 PM
Many congratulations dear Rose with your beautifully written, poignant poem which deservedly won POTW. Love the line, ‘Beneath the canopy of heaven’ and the profound message so powerfully conveyed throughout the poem. Well done! Hugs and smiles to you :):)
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Date: 10/3/2023 10:02:00 AM
Mystic Rose , this is so poignant and beautiful. Your messages ring true . We must treat each other as family . We all bleed the same color . Congratulations on POTW! Big hugs dear one, Susan :)
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Date: 10/3/2023 9:11:00 AM
Indeed, the way we look at other forms should only see spirit of God Himself indwelling the form and certainly not skin, colour, race, cultural background, gender, social position etc. Great message posted, Mystic Rose, warmest congratulations on a well deserved POTW ~ hope this poem is widely read
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Date: 10/2/2023 9:50:00 PM
A powerful poem inspired by a wonderful monoku, Vie, congratulations on POTW:)
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Date: 10/2/2023 1:20:00 PM
I see your soul, Mystic Rose, your questioning touched me, "God has Bisqued me and left you white, some he even inked them yellow" strong and blunt at times make for awesome poetry. Congratulations on your POTW! xo~Anaya
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Date: 10/2/2023 7:53:00 AM
Wonderful writing. Congrats on POTW. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 10/2/2023 7:42:00 AM
An exquisite piece of writing! The careful selection of words and the intricate way in which emotions are intertwined is truly remarkable. Congratulations on earning the title of Poem of the Week!
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Date: 10/2/2023 3:06:00 AM
A beautiful write. Love the word choice and the weaved sentiment within. Congrats on a potw we all need to study!
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Date: 10/1/2023 5:17:00 PM
My heart rejoices, knowing that God isn't human. Our soul is important, as He wants all to know Him. The color of our skin doesn't make us who we are. Your thoughts caress softly around me, Vienna. So wonderful seeing Ink Empress has inspired you. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 10/1/2023 11:56:00 AM
Mystic, a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE WEEK.
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Date: 10/1/2023 10:49:00 AM
Yeay congratulations my sweet sweet rose this should be poem of the year, because of how beautiful your heart is which is evident in your poem! Thank u again and congratulations! Love this
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Date: 10/1/2023 10:47:00 AM
Did I miss this one? So happy to see my little prodigy inspired you.. You speak words of truth.. sad that God made us all but we discriminate on so many different things including colour.. a lot of people do not realise their privileges and their unconscious bias.. Congratulation on poem of the week my friend..
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/1/2023 10:48:00 AM
Lol ur lil prodigy lol hahahha n dead am i lil?
Date: 10/1/2023 10:25:00 AM
Vie, congratulations on POTW!
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Date: 10/1/2023 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your Poem of the Week honor, Vie. Lovely composition of poetry with a soulful message all need to hear. Yes, I can see you as my next of kin, for we are all from the same source of creation. A FAV to add to my list. Enjoy your special week of recognition, my dear friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:39:00 AM
Reminds me of the hymn, "Jesus Loves the Little Children". Oh wait, did someone forget the words? Each is precious. Congratulations on POTW dear Vie! :)
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Date: 10/1/2023 6:41:00 AM
Wonderful Rose, congratulations on the award for poem of the week….. A world that has no animosity - Is what the earth was created to be - All humans are different and unique - Why can't we live in harmony and peace…… Belle
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Date: 10/1/2023 5:37:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTW, Vienna. Enjoy your special week.
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Date: 10/1/2023 5:27:00 AM
Love this great job! Congrats on potw honor!
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/2/2023 3:10:00 AM
Oops I replied twice. Lol.
Date: 10/1/2023 5:09:00 AM
Ooh nice to see this got potw and your inspiration is a none other than our dear Inky
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