Allura and Her Sentinel

One is inhibited
when to grasp for her
without care without pity,
a stark reminder
for those with intent 
for behold a portrait of nature
when to gaze upon
the blushing Rose at home
amongst her guardian thorns
a rural delight
nurtured in the city
in grounds of remembrance
for there she sparkles,
as she fabricates the scented air
basks in the sunrise
shimmers in dawn’s breaking dew.

 © Harry J Horsman 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 5:39 PM
Hi harry, this portrait of nature nurtured in the city is beautifully painted ! One cannot but admire this beauty amid her thorns.... ! Admirable .....!
Laurie Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 6:03 PM
Hello harry ... truly poetic with the beauty of a rose and its guardians - thank you harry - Lindsay
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 11:27 AM
Ahhh, how did I ever miss this gem? I try to keep up on your poems but sometimes they do get past me!!
Peranteau Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 1:11 PM
I think you found lost sir, in her pluperfect ...whuddah muse ;) sweet dreamz...much love, james
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 1:58 AM
Love it xx
Horne Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 12:27 PM
this is such a beautiful & thoughtful write, Harry
Proxenos Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 9:56 AM
What a poem of great beauty, but beauty must be guarded from deceitful invaders - kudos Harry on your deserved win my friend and your heartfelt imagery - your intense talent for poetry is always revealed in your thought provoking writes, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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November 24, 2021 at 3:01 AM
Hi Harry….how wonderfully clever describing a rose so beautifully! Debx
Deo Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 8:01 PM
shalom shalom dear Friend: I don't pretend to GRASP all the references, but I like the ideas that came: city rose and country rose, forced and "unnatural" versus simple and spontaneous. LORD knew why He gave us thorns and thistles. Anil
Deo Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 8:01 PM
shalom shalom dear Friend: I don't pretend to GRASP all the references, but I like the ideas that came: city rose and country rose, forced and "unnatural" versus simple and spontaneous. LORD knew why He gave us thorns and thistles. Anil
Mchattie Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 3:43 PM
What a lovely verse my friend. Romantic and touching. I loved it. Have a great day my friend.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 2:05 AM
another winner, excellent xx
Daniel Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 9:42 PM
Very beautiful, Harry, congratulations:)
Buehler Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 9:26 PM
Congratulations on your very deserving win with this beauty, Harry.
Jones Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 4:17 PM
Just beautiful! Congrats.
Kauffman Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 12:57 PM
Lovely metaphorical write Harry with imaginative imagery that sets this scene with perfection - the adaptable rose! Congratulations for your win. Sending you the fragrant blessings of the rose without "her guardian thorns." Wonderful phrase. Take care.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 12:19 PM
Pretty imagery, Harry! Congratulations on first place!
Brown Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 11:34 AM
What a beautiful poem, I can see why it won first place. Congratulations! ~ Debbie
Peck Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 9:00 AM
I'm back with apologies. Big congratulations on your huge win! I also like the picture you painted of a rose garden among tall NY buildings.
Peck Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 8:51 AM
I agree with Christuraj: that line is lovely and my favorite. Good luck in the contest!
Alex Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 7:36 AM
"there she sparkles, as she fabricates the scented air" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Poet Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 7:11 AM
A beautiful snapshot of a blossoming rose in the midst of a vast swath of skyscrapers. This is a wonder to behold.
Calasibetta Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Congratulations on your win! An insightful view of beauty amongst the thorns of industry. Blessings, Paulette
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 4:25 AM
Alike a rose a beautiful poem, Harry.
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November 16, 2021 at 10:45 PM
Lovely portrait of a growing rose mid a large span of buildings. A sight for sore eyes.
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