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Alertness

a fly fell down dead some ants stage an autopsy~ ‘cadaver’ in shreds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Sotto Poet
Date: 3/9/2022 1:51:00 AM
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Outstanding Metaphors and great Haiku, Valsa.
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Debra L Brown
Date: 3/8/2022 5:41:00 PM
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Oh! Valsa, this poem is a little dark. Outstanding visuals. Blessings ~ Debra
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/8/2022 1:09:00 PM
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oh my, I can sure picture this one. Many ants kind of gross me out. Lke when I see them swarming over a little piece of candy or something. ugggg.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/8/2022 12:55:00 AM
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Eating on the fly takes on a whole new perspective for me now Valsa, I wonder if I can ever hear that term again without remembering your great haiku! ~BJ
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/7/2022 11:51:00 PM
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Thanks for confirming my suspicions, Valsa ~ Antsy about Flying
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Harry Horsman
Date: 3/7/2022 8:40:00 PM
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so is the observation, dear Valsa, makes for great poetry.
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/7/2022 4:35:00 PM
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The life cycle, good Haiku, Valsa. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/7/2022 10:57:00 AM
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One of my favorite haikus of all time.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/7/2022 10:29:00 AM
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Food for thought . . . .Aloha!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/7/2022 8:15:00 AM
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Images succinctly captured.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/7/2022 7:16:00 AM
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They're like a pack of hungry lions, have watched that scene many times. Tom
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/7/2022 7:03:00 AM
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Love it! The fly dead...the ants full~now for my picnic.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 3/7/2022 6:54:00 AM
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Hi Valsa, You composed a good haiku. Each line painted a vivid picture. Well done. Have a great day-Alexis
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 3/7/2022 6:26:00 AM
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Very well constructed haiku. Great visuals.
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