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Alana Dulcita

Once in a forest, a long time ago, there dwelt a young maiden, bright, sweet and fair. Flowers she wore in her long wavy hair, and each day she’d vanish into gloaming’s glow. Alana Dulcita was this young maid’s name, a name that fell sweetly from everyone’s tongue. The townspeople loved her -both old and young, yet nobody knew from where the girl came. They only knew that, at the end of each day, with sun dipping downward into the west and sky splashed with colors Alana liked best, was when, as if magically, she’d slip away! “Where does she go?” all the villagers asked, “And how does she leave us so quietly that not even one of us ever can see? Has some kind of spell on our dear girl been cast?” Spell or no spell, the young maid had powers as into the woodland she fled and then donned a gossamer gown, hidden well near a pond surrounded by beautiful flowers. She peered into water after she’d kneel as a lovely face gazed back at her. In this perfect moment, what should occur but, like magic, the girl became real! Her filmy silk gown would blend with her skin, shrinking into a stem, and her face changed into petals till soon not a trace remained of the form that a human lives in. Alana Dulcita, her real self again, breathing lilacs’ and lilies’ sweet scent, would bow her fair face, a flower content, to repose by the pond with her kin. Awaking at dawn, renewed, she’d return to the town where they loved her so well, keeping the secret she never could tell of youth’s beauty for which humans yearn. She’d never grow old as long as she had a place of seclusion where she might go to water around which bright flowers could grow, for this is what kept the soul of hers glad! Never to marry and never to stay too long in one place, she’d always move on. Beloved she would be till the day she was gone. This, for Alana, was the only way. Alana Dulcita, where did she go when forests grew small and lake beds grew dry? Did the fair maid eventually die or is she still sleeping where bright blossoms grow?
Note: The name Alana means "the bright fair one" in Gaelic or "precious; awakening" in Hawaiian & "Beautiful dear child" in Irish/ the name Dulcita is Latin for "sweet." Written by Andrea Dietrich & Inspired by the "Reflections" Contest Sponsored by Constance La France ~A Rambling Poet~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/12/2018 1:21:00 AM
Wow Andrea, here is a real beauty I somehow missed. Stunningly expressed! Into my faves! Your talent shines like a beacon in this magnificent piece! : )
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Date: 3/5/2011 9:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win my friend. I am not in Kanpur on a regular basis hence I could not post this comment which I wanted to post on 25th. A very sweet tale blended with the beauty of Lake Girl as posted by Constance. You have created a sweet lyrical melody with the reflections of 'Reflections' my friend. Great imagery and use of nature. My good wishes for your contest entry. I have placed part 6 of 'When the Earth was in danger. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Andrea D.
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Date: 3/2/2011 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 2/28/2011 10:26:00 AM
You know, my fingers are getting sore from doing this.....ha ha......Congrats on a good win .....George
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Date: 2/28/2011 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win Andrea in Constance's contest "Reflection". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 1:55:00 PM
Hey Andrea, congratulations on your wonderful win with the awesome write, love Wilma
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Date: 2/27/2011 11:35:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful piece. I enjoyed the read. A beautiful write. Caryl
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Date: 2/26/2011 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:50:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your first place win in Reflections contest.. happy to be sharing first with a great friend and with lots of luv too...
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:05:00 AM
congrats on your 1st place win Andrea!
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Date: 2/26/2011 7:28:00 AM
Great job Andrea, good to see you at the top again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's first place honor in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/26/2011 12:07:00 AM
I was sure this would be up there. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/25/2011 11:07:00 PM
ill go with barbara, love the taste in the name. congrats.
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Date: 2/25/2011 10:26:00 PM
great result here Andrea, warm winning wishes.
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Date: 2/25/2011 9:02:00 PM
Wow..I just love the name..Not surprised at your win..congrats my dear. BG
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Date: 2/25/2011 7:54:00 PM
Knew this was a winner from the moment I read it. Many congratulations for this big win.
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:13:00 PM
flying high with this fantastic write... big applause for high win, andrea!:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:03:00 PM
Hi Andrea !Congrats on your 1st place win in the contest of Constance!---kash
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:41:00 PM
I was sure this would be a winner!! Well deserved, Andrea! Congratulations!!
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of constance, Andrea
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:13:00 PM
Constance liked this poem better than I had expected. Andrea, congratulations on attaining a first place finish with this splendid entry.
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Date: 2/25/2011 9:40:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 2/23/2011 10:36:00 AM
Sweet tale of the flowery maiden. Something about the smell of lilacs makes me happy, must be childhood memories or something. Well done
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Date: 2/22/2011 6:26:00 PM
What a wonderful imagination and mystical places you have taken the reader with this one, Andrea!! Looks like a winner!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 2/22/2011 5:13:00 PM
so many facets to this piece Andrea, i wish you well in the contest with this flowing write.
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