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After the Hurricane

After the hurricane blew through and the heavy rain receded, you are left devastated. Feelings of numbness and disconnected with stress, fear, suffering, and mental recurring nightmares from the unforgettable howling loud winds. 

     Roofs and walls ripped off houses by the strong winds, trees bent and pulled by the roots. The prolonged heavy rains that produce widespread and significant river flooding inland and into the homes. 

     Some people were left homeless; few have lost loved ones, others endured the difficulties of living in hazardous conditions of water and wind damage, facing the fact being exposed to molds and mildew. 

     They had to deal with the pest that came in through cracks, electricity going out not only for days, but for some weeks. The upsetting emotions they had having to wait to replace or repair their home, furnishings, and utilities.

     Returning to calm after the storm, recovering, healing from the damaged the wind and flooding had left behind from the massive storm that had passed through days before.

gray skies driven rain
high gale winds items airborne
time heals rebuilding


11/9/2020

Contest Name	Best N-A poem of 2020
Sponsored	John Hamilton

After The Hurricane Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Proxenos Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 6:02 AM
Glorious poem, have never lived through a hurricane but reading your poem, I experienced that awful fear, dread and hopelessness. Good luck for a win, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Callus Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Your descriptive powers are impressive, Eve! I often read of hurricanes leaving havoc in their wake...fortunately we do not get get anything of the sort in Malta. ~ Regards & hugs // paul
Kendrick Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 3:28 AM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
La France Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 10:54 AM
Eve, wonderful write for the contest, best of luck _Constance
Crabtree Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 5:05 PM
A great poem, Eve. Fits perfectly with all of those we've had this year
Mcintosh Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 3:19 AM
So furious and ferocious - So much to fear. I love the way you've written this gem. God bless you dear friend
Buhagiar Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 11:10 PM
A well described aftermath of a hurricane. ~~
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