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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ With noiseless step sweet memory comes and leads me gently through her twilight realms. What poet’s tune has ever sung or delicate pencil ever portrayed the enchanting, sometimes shadowy land where memory dwells? It has valleys, cheerless, lone, and dreary dark-shaded by the mournful cypress tree. Yet, its sunlit mountain tops are bathed in heavenly blue upon its rocky cliffs. In the dreamy light of distant years are clustered joys, serenity of other days. Upon its gentle, sloping hillsides bend the weeping willows stand over the sacred dust of dearly departed ones. I bound away across the noisy years onto the utmost verge of memory’s land where earth and sky in dreamy distance meet. Wandering along the rolling years I see the shadow of my former self gliding from childhood to womanhood. The path of life takes me through many valleys and leads me over the summit where the sunbeams fall. Though time can be relentless, and years go on by I find myself surrounded by memory’s sweet lullaby.

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Date: 2/11/2024 10:30:00 AM
Your journey through the noisy years were pleasures to read about, Sara. Your imagery was luscious. I liked the way you used the different species of trees throughout the poem. The rhythm of the poem made it quite enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing your fine poetry with us. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/11/2024 3:50:00 PM
wow, your comments were spot on, Bill. You brought me joy this evening, thank you...du bist der Beste
Date: 2/10/2024 12:25:00 AM
"It has valleys, cheerless, lone, and dreary dark-shaded by the mournful cypress tree. Yet, its sunlit mountain tops are bathed in heavenly blue upon its rocky cliffs." Beautiful lines, dear Sara. As we retrace our steps back to the past, memories, sweet and sour surround us. Life is a conglomeration of mixed experiences. Your poem has escorted me to my own past. Lovely poem
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/10/2024 4:14:00 PM
your comments were both poetic, soft, and meaningful, dear Valsa. Thank you for your insights and kind words. I agree..when we retrace our steps back, memories engulf us. You're words are wise for life truly is a conglomeration of mixed experiences...well said. Grateful my poem escorted you to your past. Wishing you the best, blessings, Sara
Date: 2/9/2024 3:07:00 PM
Ah, when you write lengthy ones, you help me dip into your memories and oh how they are golden to my heart as yours I'm sure Sara, :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/9/2024 3:20:00 PM
thank you for your lovely comments, dear Rose. Glad the length didn't deter you from reading. Thanks for sharing my memories...and have a great evening. Sara
Date: 2/9/2024 1:01:00 PM
Beautiful poetry! I love the end.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/9/2024 3:20:00 PM
thank you Paige...appreciate your kind words & visit today. hugs, Sara
Date: 2/9/2024 11:20:00 AM
Your poem reminds me that I should flip my photos more often. My memory is defective after my fall last year. But visions are sometimes remembered. and we must not let them loose.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/9/2024 3:22:00 PM
I agree...flipping through photos sparks my memories; like you, I don't want to lose them. Sorry to hear about your fall. I've fallen twice over the past year, fracturing my vertebrae. I'll never be the same...but exercise and walking help. Take care, Sara
Date: 2/9/2024 10:45:00 AM
I enjoyed this poem. Positive memories invigorate the soul. Our brains are file cabinets.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/9/2024 3:23:00 PM
I like the 'file cabinet' imagery. You're so right...and positive memories warm the soul. Thanks for your visit and lovely comments. Enjoy your weekend, Sara
Date: 2/9/2024 9:36:00 AM
Nice poem Sara. Deep reflection on life with past memories. I like the concluding stanza, "Though time can be relentless, and years go on by I find myself surrounded by memory’s sweet lullaby."
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/9/2024 3:25:00 PM
ahhh, thank you, Jay, for those encouraging words. Grateful you liked the ending...worked on that for a while. Have a great evening, Sara
Date: 2/9/2024 9:15:00 AM
Dear Sara, Your contemplation on the potency of memory is truly great. The vivid imagery you conjure evokes a deep sense of nostalgia aptly illustrating nature of reminiscing. I am captivated by your deft use of personification to navigate the diverse terrains of happiness, sorrow, and cherished instances spent with beloved individuals. Your eloquent portrayal encapsulates the trajectory of existence, starting from the innocence of childhood and culminating in the complexities of adulthood.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/9/2024 3:27:00 PM
thank you, dear Sotto, for your kind and eloquent comments. I'm grateful you found the imagery evoked that nostalgic feeling.I'm glad you noticed the personification...I worked on this poem for hours until I discovered personification was the best way to make this poem work. I appreciate your insights and your visit. Your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 2/9/2024 6:45:00 AM
Dearest Sara, A wonderful reflection on the power and complexity of memory. The imagery you create is breathtaking, perfectly capturing the bittersweet nature of looking back. I love how you personify memory, leading you through its varied landscapes of joy, sorrow, and cherished moments with loved ones. You beautifully encapsulate life's journey from childhood innocence to adult realities. Memory is a comforting lullaby, a reminder of who we are and where we've been. -Blessings, Daniel
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/9/2024 3:29:00 PM
I'm grateful you 'got' my poem, Daniel. You summarized my efforts and outcomes beautifully, and I'm grateful for your insights. Personification was the only way I found to get this poem to work the way I wanted it to...so I'm glad you noticed it. I appreciate your mindful and insightful comments. Have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 2/9/2024 6:01:00 AM
Very nice Sara. Memory's sweet lullaby leaves this poem with me after it ends. Well done. I hope you have a nice day :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/9/2024 3:24:00 PM
thank you, Heidi..I'm glad the poem will stay with you after reading it...thanks for those words. I am grateful for them...have a splendid weeknd, Sara

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