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Across Realms

Across Realms Across vast realms Where clouds collide Like scarred chariots In rush hour traffic Storms boil over Fed by fiery wombs of dawn’s inferno With flames of sunrise fire, As thrashing rain Plants rainbow seeds In metaphoric soils To harvest far flung sunbows From cerulean fields. Sun and storm wedded Hopefulness Whispers A haunting covenant Drenched by hues of hope Shielded by the sun. Binding misty edges Of edgeless domains Revelations In beatific splendor soar Kaleidoscopic pergolas Highlight sky bound wings Tinted by ethereal arches When shimmering puddles Unfold across Heaven’s doorstep Across realms Bathed in mystic grandeur. 5-2-23 Contest: This or That Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Theme Chosen: Across Realms

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Date: 5/12/2023 10:23:00 PM
Your poem creates such lovely vibes. Love the comparison of clouds colliding in the vast realms like scarred chariots in rush hour traffic. The realm of the sky with 'misty edges or edgeless domains' highlights the vastness of the cerulean sky. Indeed your poems stretch our imagination to edgeless domains. Lovely poem as ever dear Sam.
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Date: 5/7/2023 12:19:00 PM
Your vividly descriptive poem expresses a reverential awe of those "realms"--sources of mystery, Sam. Janice
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/8/2023 9:40:00 AM
Hi Janice, thank you many times over for your beautiful and gracious words! This theme turned out to be a journey into the gossamer mystery in the realm of the rainbow - a journey into the covenant! So happy you enjoyed it! Blessings!
Date: 5/6/2023 3:23:00 PM
It will be something to see in person. Top of my "bucket list", Sam. Nice entry for the contest, my friend. Good luck! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/8/2023 9:28:00 AM
Hi Bill! Thank you so much Bill. Truly beyond the rainbow will be an amazing sight- an amazing experience! So appreciate your kind words. Thank you for sharing a covenant rainbow with me! Sending you blessings!
Date: 5/5/2023 6:34:00 PM
This is awesome Sam, like an epic adventure across those realms!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/5/2023 8:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Hat! I like your feedback "like an epic adventure!" What a wonderful perspective. It does feel like an adventure. So appreciate your visit. Thank you! Here's to more poetic adventures!
Date: 5/5/2023 8:33:00 AM
You write with stunning imagery, Sam, mine pales in comparison:)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/5/2023 11:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Jo. I am deeply honored by your beautiful feedback and I cannot help but think of your beautiful rainbow of images your created as the basis for our collaboration! I was so inspired by your imagery. I feel a kindred soul in painting beauty with the brush of words. So grateful for your message. Blessings to you!!
Date: 5/4/2023 4:23:00 PM
A lovely poem, Sam. I chose the same lines Anaya chose as my favorites, altho your words are like a masterpiece, beautifully painted with sure brushstrokes.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/5/2023 11:41:00 AM
Thank you so much Ann. I deeply appreciate your gracious feedback. You have brought such joy into my day. As poets we are so blessed as words, and the images they create, are our playmates always ready to take us away into the shades and hues of life! Take care! Blessings!!
Date: 5/4/2023 3:22:00 PM
"To harvest far flung sunbows From cerulean fields" "In beatific splendor soar Kaleidoscopic pergolas " keep natures faithful realms flowing, such a nice vibe! Music in back round..."Best Of My Love" The Eagles. b0l Sam
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/5/2023 11:33:00 AM
Anaya, I am deeply touched by your beautiful words and love the music reference! Perfect! I kept seeing rainbows as I thought about this theme. It was a delightful foray into their magic and mystique! Thank you for sharing in my awe of these amazing gifts from nature - these covenant messengers. Blessings to you!!

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