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Abbi of Bacabi

She left one day, her Kiowa village And stood proudly in the sun Beneath the Tabletop Mountains And walked among the golden sea Of waving grass, fearless and alone Waiting, with keen ears and sacred breath For the setting sun to call her name So that her spirit could cross the great divide No more would she walk Across my night or my day... Except on the wind that touches my face Or the laughter from a child Or perhaps in the song a meadow lark sings And surely in the pleasure of my dreams And in slumber I can rest, knowing full well That her spirit has entered the land of green pastures. Inspired by t.c.cannon and his wonderful artwork

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/16/2012 1:59:00 PM
Hey Carrie peaceful uplifting images! Light & Love
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Date: 2/20/2012 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on the great win in ~Brian's~ "Suit Yourself" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/18/2012 9:09:00 PM
Wow....this is one of your best Carrie! I love the beautiful imagery and respect you express in this honored piece. Congratulations on your wonderful win with this gem. Into my favorites.
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Date: 2/17/2012 6:37:00 PM
Congratulations for a great write.. Jon
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Date: 2/17/2012 6:01:00 PM
congrats Carrie on another excellent win for this remarkable entry luv..
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Date: 2/17/2012 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carrie. This is poetic artwork.
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Date: 2/17/2012 2:26:00 PM
Carrie, your name is at the top of the 'contest winners' list, for a reason. This is a wonderful write. Congrats on winning 3rd place in Brian's contest..........S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/17/2012 1:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Carrie, love Elizabeth
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Date: 7/1/2009 1:10:00 PM
Carrie Congratulation on your first place win!! So well done! I've missed you and reading your wonderful words! Love Laura :)
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Date: 7/1/2009 12:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, great write
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Date: 6/30/2009 11:49:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Abe's Carriecontest.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/30/2009 3:09:00 PM
what a lovely win..Well done as usual. BG
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Date: 6/30/2009 2:13:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on a supurb write and first place win!-AA
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Date: 6/30/2009 12:35:00 PM
Carrie, this is brilliant beauty and such a well deserved First Place win! Congrats!!! XOXOXOXO Love, Shar
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Date: 6/30/2009 12:07:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on first place, well deserved...Raul
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Date: 6/30/2009 10:35:00 AM
congratulations you have won 1st place in the contest."Native American Ekphrasis"(t.c. cannon) Thank you for supporting my contest. ..........Alopez
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Date: 5/29/2009 7:42:00 PM
Once again the wealth of your poetic prowess shines through; capturing the Native American of spirit and wisdom- Well done, my friend!! poet butterfly
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Date: 5/22/2009 5:10:00 AM
Great imagery Carrie; loved it !
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Date: 5/21/2009 10:45:00 AM
ear Carrie, I thought I had already Commented on this Is "Abbi" from the Hopi Nation I watched Her "Spirit" "cross the great divide" Vivid Imagery Awesome Write and I wish YOU the Happiest of Birthdays LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/21/2009 3:32:00 AM
Carrie, this is stunning; in its imagry and message. like L'nass said, your power lay in the subtle, getting under your skin and sticking like glue covered seeds, blooming when needed. love this and you, if this doens't sin I'll be a monkey's uncle. love, Kristin
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Date: 5/20/2009 12:37:00 PM
Carrie, I am sentimental about this poem in the contest ... it was not written it was become ... what marvelous power you invoked ... so soluble is your soul in the richness of this write. A favorite for sure.
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Date: 5/20/2009 8:27:00 AM
Carrie that is an awesome write, I admire the Native Americans, their cultures, their strong beliefs, and their steadfast pride for their way of life. They at one time were sorely mistreated and made to look like they were at fault. God Bless my friend and have a heartfelt day. Ron
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Date: 5/20/2009 4:19:00 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful Carrie. Deeply spiritual and so perfect for the art. Just wonderful. Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/20/2009 4:04:00 AM
This is so well done my talented friend..you paint a picture so well Carrie...tabletop mountain is awesome..so many awesome lines in your write...great work...best wishes...
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Date: 5/20/2009 12:21:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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