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A World Without Conflict

Written: March 07, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ As I gaze up at the sky, A vision appears in my mind: A ring of children, of all hues and races, Joking, holding hands, embracing; A ring spanning a stallion world A ring versatile yet unfurled, A ring symbolizing brotherhood A ring of abounding love. This planet—also known as home It's such a stupendous elixir, We may grow, sow, and share food, From its sky, we rave water From its clay, we nurture, From its stone we build flats And in her womb, we lay. Born as aureate jewels, Can ignite or extinguish embers The universe is a bedizen of promise; Here it hangs its head with a chuckle But, the world is a vile caesura. Doom lullabies whispered, As pilotless drones strike Phantasm pristine promise Fetched forward from fallacy; Sky and sea, once majestic Ashen gray—a hint of skepticism Graves replaced hospitals Leaders now pave tombs  With heroism... Falsehoods ratified by political fear, Whilst pillars and epitaphs are in the sky, Food scarcity—fueled by inflation Friends turn foes in a dismal imply Social enigma—imposed by fear, And kids frolic with rubble—the worst is near The early sky is tearful Blaming acid rain for hate World-destroying plummet Atone for the past, but futile; Forlorn screams flood the globe Unfathomable July snowfall A stark signal of our perilous crisis. An inherently warlike planet An inherently hostile universe Killing animals, kids, and seniors, Ill intent spills, pandemonium drools; Greedy for what we lack Yearning for ash, rocks, blood, Scorching soul, gaping abyss, Sliding down, winding tracks, Wanting to flaunt Falling star, soul stab. Yet we share blood and organs Requiring alike air, One day, its clay will wrap us all.

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Date: 3/14/2024 10:40:00 AM
Stunning conclusion, inevitable SP. A ring proves to be an important part, a symbol and a great vision. Moving, hugs~Anaya
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Date: 3/8/2024 8:10:00 PM
What a striking contrast you have drawn between two types of worlds, one where everyone is happy, children frolicking in amusement, and men sharing a common brotherhood where they grow and share food. The other is torn by agitation and bitterness where there is a scarcity of food and human kindness and where 'ill intents spill' and pandemonium prevails. We all prefer the former state. Let us not lose hope and work for a better world where conflicts cease and peace prevails. Dear Lasaad, with powerful words you have presented the two worlds. It is up to us now to choose.
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Date: 3/8/2024 12:08:00 PM
SP, I love the contrast between the beginning and end of this poem. We try to say we have hope and don't know how it all ends. Your last line about clay will wrap us all could be interpreted in different ways. It's a wonderful way to end a poem and to allow readers to draw our own conclusion. That is the sign of a truly great piece of work. Additionally, I could understand everything you were saying, my head doesn't hurt, and I can still laugh. You capture the nature of the choices we have.
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Date: 3/7/2024 4:03:00 PM
dearest Sotto--your poem addresses the coming of apocalyptic world. The vision of a beautiful, unified planet in the first three verses gives rise to a divided planet where propagandized fear turns friends to foes; earth becomes a stark place where children are forced to play with post-war rubble. Earth falls yet the last two lines offer a glimmer of hope. Such outstanding imagery that underscores a harsh reality that some believe is coming. Outstanding! enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 3/7/2024 3:26:00 PM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 3/7/2024 10:45:00 AM
My dear brother, your poem paints a vivid and thought-provoking picture of the complexities and contradictions of our world. The imagery of children from diverse backgrounds coming together in a ring symbolizes the ideal of unity and brotherhood. However, the poem also delves into the harsh realities and challenges that plague our planet... I have found what is evil and what is not is influenced by the media a lot and alters the perception of many... BOL in contest...
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Date: 3/7/2024 9:28:00 AM
Unfortunately people keep igniting the fuel of hate and division. They send common sense and manners packing, allow violence, murder and mayhem. When the world gets better, the evil build uncontrollable fires then pretend to pour water on the sin. It goes round and round this way. Some want love and peace but some are truly against it. Love your vision of children getting along. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 3/7/2024 9:22:00 AM
Dear Sotto, This is a stark picture of our world's current state and the potential for a harmonious future. Your contrast between the beauty of our planet and the devastation wrought by conflict is hauntingly portrayed. Also, your depiction of children from all walks of life coming together in unity is particularly moving. Your poem effectively shows the inherent goodness within humanity and the possibility of a world celebrated rather than feared. Sotto my friend, these are very thought-provoking words that challenge us to envision and strive towards a better world. - Blessings Daniel
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