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A Winter Star

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A gaggle of geese fly south toward the glow, Leaving behind the cold wind to blow. Dark grey clouds amassed afar. Very cold we are, The night sky Star, Shines on high, Whilst rain is not far. We run to rest in our car. We huddle and kiss for love we know A gaggle of geese fly south toward the glow. 20 January 2023 Writing Challenge - Andaree Form - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France placed 2

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2023 11:42:00 PM

Back with congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara

Constance La France

Date: 2/4/2023 7:01:00 AM

Victor, a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, well done, I cannot see your image but I bet it was lovely, Constance

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 2/4/2023 7:36:00 AM

Thank you, Victor.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/26/2023 8:42:00 AM

Back with big congratulations on your win dear Victor! :)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 1/25/2023 7:42:00 PM

No doubt about that one Victor. Well done, Congrats on your placing.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/23/2023 12:30:00 AM

Brilliant, Victor, yours just flows smoothly:)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/22/2023 1:39:00 PM

Perfect form for the contest Victor. hugs! :)

Sally Eslinger

Date: 1/22/2023 8:43:00 AM

Hi there, Victor! Yes! Just tapped away to Andrea. Love this form & it really carried you into some superb sensual imagist lines! Bravo! Huge hugs! sally

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/22/2023 7:53:00 AM

Great imagery, wonderful love poem and a definite win in the contest my friend Victor. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/22/2023 7:43:00 AM

i think this is an excellent rendering of a very tricky form; it should do well in the contest..thanks for commenting on my work.:)

Joseph May

Date: 1/22/2023 6:43:00 AM

Very nicely penned Victor, GL in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2023 9:46:00 AM

Victor, you did the middle part correctly. The middle word is a b rhyme, not with a. And that's how you did it!

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 1/21/2023 12:31:00 AM

Oh this is fun! Beautiful words and form!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2023 5:38:00 PM

oh this is so nice, Victor. Thanks for trying out my Andaree form. I hope Constance loves it.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/20/2023 3:19:00 PM

Wonderful Andaree Victor, I can see the geese from the imagery.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/20/2023 3:01:00 PM

Awesome write. I have to redo mine.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 1/20/2023 2:29:00 PM

Nice idea for a Poem Victor. l see you say you have doubts. You have soup mail !!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2023 11:58:00 AM

I like the way that you started and ended with the same line kind of closing it into its envelope. Thanks for sharing you contest entry with us(the one you said you couldn't write). Your visit to my page a delight. Sara

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 1/20/2023 12:52:00 PM

My fifth attempt and I still have doubts.

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/20/2023 9:46:00 AM

Your images are fantastic, Victor; they have just the right amount of passion and scenic wonders. You did a great job with this. best wishes for the contest,