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A Walking Stick As a Christmas Gift

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There was an old man who lived in Maine, Everyday he would complain of pain, Pestered everyone but no one dared shun So his friends kindly bought him a cane. I don't know if I manage a message tomorrow. But I wish all at poetry soup A VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS.

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Date: 2/2/2022 3:51:00 PM
Cute limerick , Victor..
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Date: 1/12/2022 8:25:00 PM
A cane to quiet his pain? Or to stop hearing Man from Maine complain? ( Enjoying Christmas spirit yet. Thanx Victor) shalom shalom
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Date: 12/25/2021 9:54:00 PM
gosh, I wish this had appeared in my limerick contest. It's quite nice, victor. I am trying to catch up on comments late tonight but I saw your soupmail and I hope all goes well with your poem!!
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Date: 12/25/2021 11:14:00 AM
I like the limerick and the Christmas message. Thank you for stopping by. Sara
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Date: 12/25/2021 9:11:00 AM
A cane for Christmas. I can relate to your Limerick Victor. I have never been able to come up with even one Limerick. I hope your Christmas is Merry my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 12/24/2021 6:43:00 AM
Lovely limerick on a great gift, Victor:) merry Christmas to you:)
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Date: 12/23/2021 7:59:00 PM
I am reading a limerick of yours for the first time... ! Beautiful attempt. An ideal gift for the old man. Hope that will put him at ease for some time ! Wish a joyful Christmas and all blessings of the Lord to you Victor !
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Date: 12/23/2021 3:32:00 PM
Hello Victor ... this is a gift that he will treasure every day - thank you Victor - Lindsay
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Date: 12/23/2021 3:14:00 PM
Good one, Victor. A cane is a very, very good gift. MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU!
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Date: 12/23/2021 2:13:00 PM
- A useful gift, Victor - Thank you so much for a lovely Christmas card ... have a wonderful Christmas :) - hugs and love // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/23/2021 12:58:00 PM
Greetings, Victor. I'm extending you season blessings that are full of calm and peace. With best wishes. Many  hugs
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Date: 12/23/2021 11:55:00 AM
Happy holidays to you and yours, Victor. Your witty and fun limerick brings smiles. :D
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Date: 12/23/2021 11:18:00 AM
Hi Victor, Good limerick. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and your loved ones. Have a nice day my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/23/2021 9:53:00 AM
Merry Christmas!
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Date: 12/23/2021 5:18:00 AM
Nice limerick, Victor. Wishing you and your family a very Merry Christmas and a Healthy & Happy New Year! ~CM
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Date: 12/23/2021 4:23:00 AM
Dear Victor, sending you seasonal greetings filled with love and serenity. Kindest regards...Love & Hugs Delice
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Date: 12/23/2021 3:54:00 AM
Very practical gift--one that I am sure he will use and appreciate. Many thanks my friend for your good wishes for the festive season. My best to you for a very merry Christmas and happy new year.
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Date: 12/23/2021 3:13:00 AM
We are getting very attached to our walking sticks....Delice
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Date: 12/23/2021 1:21:00 AM
Hopefully that will shut him up lol. Merry Christmas to you Victor. Tom
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 12/23/2021 1:22:00 AM
Same to you, my friend.

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