A Visit With Grannie

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I go to visit my kindly grannie, And I am met by her golden orange cat; With a kink in his whisker and a tummy fat, The door opens after many an irritable knock- I am caught in a generous loud yell for my nanny. She ushers me inside and I sit on an absurd old chair, The chair keeps wanting to fall over - I have to take care; Oh dear, who was the engineer of this lopsided thing I sit on, When I move this way or that, it emits an odd, creaking song. I do have to appreciate the lovely purple iris on the kitchen table, And grannie makes an excellent cup of tea and cookies made of maple; I was genial in my praise and think she is quite admirable - she has flare, Don't know an iota about tea but grannie tells me her brand is quite costly. I help her get the dishes in order, then she says. . . . I have to do my washy! __________________________ July 11, 2016 Poetry/Rhyme/A Visit With Grannie Copyright Protected, ID 16-808-045-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Premiere Contest Number 3 Sponsor, A Skat Third Place ______________________________________________ For the Premiere contest, Make A Poem sponsor, Shadow Hamilton Third Place

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