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A Thunder Suite

The thunder rolls, a spring rain pours, low solid gray clouds wrap around in all directions, and fog banks between trees of the forest with gray and dark green scalloped edges like the sand on the beach compelling the poet's eyes to experience all of the morn.Tender new life formed of different shades of green decorates the woods and homeplaces. As the rain drip-drops from the eaves, a bird's throaty call floats across the damp soggy air.
the damp breeze stirs sound of wind chimes varied music.. animals silent Poet Exits Porch
Sponsor: Sheri Fresonke Harper Contest: Three Stanza Suite Prose poetry Haiku Brevette Written April 07,2014

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Date: 4/26/2014 6:06:00 PM
What a beautiful description. . Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/26/2014 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations once again, dear Sara. This poem pulls me to join you, to feel the place where this poem was born !! Lovely!
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Date: 4/26/2014 8:58:00 AM
Ahhh, Sara you've written something awesome. Congrats to you...so glad to see you at the top. BG
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Date: 4/26/2014 7:14:00 AM
This is so good Sara! I have to echo Sheri's comment about the raincloud on top...fascinating! Both the haiku and brevette come out with winning colours too! // congrats on a merited win. // paul
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Date: 4/26/2014 6:23:00 AM
Awesome win with three stanza suite. Congrats, very unique, sara
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Date: 4/26/2014 12:19:00 AM
Sara such a great poetry I hv never known earlier! Wonderful write worth top win ! Congrats!
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Date: 4/25/2014 9:02:00 PM
Sara, excellent. I love how you make the prose poetry so heavy like a dark cloud hanging over the whole poem. Wonderful details, you keep me right there. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 4/9/2014 3:24:00 AM
WOW, this is your poem, and I love it Sara, Poet Exits Porch,,, real live imagery... thank you for sharing... Linda
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Date: 4/8/2014 8:11:00 PM
What a perfect entry for the contest Sara! I wish I'd thought of it !! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 4/8/2014 4:59:00 AM
- Easy to understand that you love nature Sara - Beautiful! - Always enjoyable to read your poem - Good luck in the contest - Have a pleasant day - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/8/2014 4:53:00 AM
BIG lover of nature so this piece speaks volumes to me. Very nice. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 4/7/2014 5:36:00 PM
Lovely write from you Sara..Good luck!
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Date: 4/7/2014 2:58:00 PM
I so enjoy your nature poetry that i wrote one for you my friend, i'm getting ready to post it in a moment it's called the nightingales song let me know what you think dear lady. cheri
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Date: 4/7/2014 12:16:00 PM
you fascinate me with the richness of emotion through this unique artwork, sara.. so original and beautiful!.. huggs
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Date: 4/7/2014 8:56:00 AM
Awesome! What a tremendous write here my friend! I surely enjoyed reading this delightful poem here this morning! This is a wonderful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/7/2014 8:33:00 AM
Enjoyed your write, Sara. I can almost smell the fresh spring air the way you described it. Awesome job!
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