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A Spring Storm

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Was not that bad here just small weak limbs down..

a spring storm rises wind,thunder, pouring rain, hail rain dances all night beaten tulips petals fall velvet path to the garden

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 2:34:00 PM

Sara this is a nice win...Linda

Skat A

Date: 4/18/2015 12:14:00 PM

Sara:) Congratulations, on your awesome Tanka win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2015 12:44:00 AM

Good one, Sara, however, i don't like a fallen flower... Enjoyed the shady imagery..Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2015 11:57:00 PM

way to go in the contest, Sara. BIG congrats.

Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 4/8/2015 11:51:00 PM

Congs, i loved this my dear #Sara Owe-some

Tammy Reams

Date: 4/7/2015 8:00:00 PM

Congrats on your beautiful Tanka and win!

Faye Gibson

Date: 4/7/2015 5:54:00 PM

Beautiful, Sara; well done.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/7/2015 4:37:00 PM

Sara congratulations on this wonderful tanka win and a 7. Blessings

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/7/2015 3:48:00 PM

Sara, congratulations on your podium win for your wonderful Tanka. I love the imagery. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 4/7/2015 11:52:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats Sara-) Hugs jan xx

Kim Shaw

Date: 4/7/2015 10:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your nice win, Sara! Hugs, Kimberly

Joseph May

Date: 4/7/2015 8:55:00 AM

Congrats on a great win Sara

Jerry Bolton

Date: 4/3/2015 3:29:00 PM

Eh . . . These spring storms can be, as you know, big time vicious . . .

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/3/2015 10:35:00 AM

There's beauty in and after the storm...A 7. Have a blessed weekend, Sara. Kim :)

Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2015 7:32:00 AM

Sara, you have penned the storm so well in your tanka, well done 7, we have had storms like this also, but mostly lately ours are snow storm and thanks for visiting my poetry

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/3/2015 3:00:00 AM

Love it Sara ...... Happy Easter :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/2/2015 8:49:00 PM

Very nice...I love the ending. BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2015 5:01:00 PM

this is pretty nice, Sara. Love the imagery especially lines three and five!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/2/2015 2:30:00 PM

- The weather is not like before - Yesterday we had snow storm - A great poem Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/2/2015 11:00:00 AM

Very well done with wonderful imagery. Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/2/2015 8:50:00 AM

Such vivid imagery Sara - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx