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A Spring Fling

A warm morning with baby blue skies and cotton clouds Dew glistens on green stems of watermelon pink peony buds A Robin prances on the ground pecking at grass sprigs As trees happily wave their fresh leaves in the breeze Chipmunks scurry about busy stealing seeds and nuts A flash of red and white appears with magnificent black wings Proudly displaying his tufted fire red crest while perched on Pine bark Drumming on the bark, then pausing with piercing shrills of his calls Squirrels freeze then continue to chatter and chase along the branches As Crows squawk and circle above the trees, announcing their arrival 3/13/2022 Contest: Form I - Imagism New Poem Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 3/19/2022 8:18:00 AM
Tania, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest with your beautiful poem full of lovely imagery ~Constance
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/20/2022 4:21:00 AM
Thank you Constance and thank you for my placement!
Date: 3/17/2022 4:21:00 PM
I could just picture the colorful scene of nature in my mind’s eye from your descriptive poetic words, Tania! I enjoyed this very much, and good luck in the contest! :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/17/2022 4:24:00 PM
Thank you Laura!
Date: 3/13/2022 10:45:00 PM
A melange of beautiful images ! Simply lovely !
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/14/2022 3:44:00 AM
Thank you Valsa!
Date: 3/13/2022 6:12:00 PM
Perfect Imagism with incredibly descriptive verses - a Spring day comes alive with vivid images. Best wishes ~ Mala
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/13/2022 7:18:00 PM
Thank you Mala!
Date: 3/13/2022 3:46:00 PM
Very discriptive imagery Tanya, you captured the signs of spring well in your verse. It can't come quick enough, enjoy your week ahead. Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/13/2022 4:12:00 PM
Thank you Tom!