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A Soft Kiss

A soft kiss touched me in the breeze As if it emerged from the trees Arriving like a winter tease With dreams of spring and bumble bees I love you so, you hold the keys To my heart to which, you do seize Today, I will not let it freeze So, I kneel to pray on my knees Heidi Sands 1/7/20 Placed 3rd in the First Time Here – Any Monorhyme Poetry Contest.

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Hilo Poet

Date: 1/15/2020 3:36:00 PM

A beautifully tendered verse Heidi, my thanks for your participation, and my compliments on your placement~@wk

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2020 8:58:00 PM

Thank you William. I appreciate the opportunity and kind comment :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/11/2020 12:56:00 PM

This lovely Heidi. I especially enjoyed your first stanza. New year blessings. xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/11/2020 1:36:00 PM

Thank you Connie. Happy New Year! :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/7/2020 10:26:00 PM

Golly, this is beautiful from start to finish. Best Wishes, Heidi. Panagiota

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/8/2020 10:52:00 AM

Thank you very much Panagiota. I hope you have a nice day :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/7/2020 7:57:00 PM

Ah, with dreams of Spring and bumble bees. So nice, Heidi! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/7/2020 9:58:00 PM

Yes, the dreams of 'spring'! Thank you Gershon. Goodnight :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/7/2020 5:33:00 PM

What a kiss dearest, Heidi. Seldom one gets a kiss like that. Beautifully done! Hugs x

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/7/2020 5:39:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios. I appreciate your kindness and support very much. Hugs :)

Gary Smith

Date: 1/7/2020 4:51:00 PM

Lovely poem Heidi, much enjoyed. :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/7/2020 5:09:00 PM

Thank you Gary :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/7/2020 4:18:00 PM

Excellent verses of love and romance--enjoyed the beautiful rhyming tone, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/7/2020 4:41:00 PM

Thank you Vijay! I appreciate your supportive comment :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/7/2020 3:29:00 PM

a lovely sensuous monorhyme Heidi, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/7/2020 3:55:00 PM

Thank you Jan. I appreciate your visit and kind comment. I hope all is well. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/7/2020 3:23:00 PM

That soft kiss brought along by the breeze is inspirational, Heidi. Good entry. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/7/2020 3:27:00 PM

That is nice to hear. Thank you Paul :)

Lin Lane

Date: 1/7/2020 3:22:00 PM

Soft gentle kisses are so scrumptious, and lead to so much more. Well wishes in the contest, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/7/2020 3:27:00 PM

Thank you Lin. I appreciate your kind comment :)

David Mchattie

Date: 1/7/2020 3:21:00 PM

Well done. I've been trying to write a poem for this contest... but no luck so far. Have a great day my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/7/2020 3:27:00 PM

Thank you David. I wish you the best with writing a poem for this contest :)

David Wakeling

Date: 1/7/2020 3:00:00 PM

Nestled among the fallen leaves.I tried to avoid my many peeves. Forced rhyme can drown the meaning

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/7/2020 3:26:00 PM

Thank you for your visit :)

Chris Green

Date: 1/7/2020 2:41:00 PM

Really nicely done my friend. That is exactly how a kiss can feel and how one might react. Best wishes in the contest.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/7/2020 2:43:00 PM

Thank you Chris. I appreciate your kind comments. I hope you are having a nice day!