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The moonbeams spread from high against the midnight blue of winter's sky so full of falling snow. Here I am lured to go, while paths are still aglow, and take a walk in the small park nearby. Now led by each lamp's ray that shines so splendidly to light my way I see snowflakes alight on everything in sight and much to my delight watch each one grow the crystalline display. The trees, whose arms were bare, now lined with fluffy coats by steady care of gently falling flakes that pile as each one makes snow-white designs and wakes each branch and twig with pure artistic flare. And prancing there alone, amidst the swirling drifts, the wind has blown, a deer in search of green which nowhere can be seen in this majestic scene of sparkling winter-white, the sky has sown. December 30, 2017 ~1st Place~ Contest: Rhyme Me A Poem Sponsor: Broken Wings Judged: 01/11/2018 Rules: 6 line verses x 4 = 24 lines total Lines 2 and 6 (10 Syllables Each) Lines 1, 3, 4, 5 (6 Syllables Each)

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Date: 1/14/2018 7:40:00 PM
Just beautiful Sandra! Congratulations on your win !!! ~Judy
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/16/2018 6:32:00 PM
Thank you very much, Judith! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/12/2018 1:40:00 PM
Dear Sandra, this beautiful work of art appreciates the winter snow and honors nature at its best! A very deserving congratulations on your first placement!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/16/2018 6:32:00 PM
Thank you once again, Connie, for your lovely comments and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/12/2018 8:26:00 AM
Beautifully crafted Sandra, congratulations...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/16/2018 6:33:00 PM
Thank you very much, Charlie, for your visit, lovely comment and congrats! :) Sandra
Date: 1/12/2018 8:13:00 AM
A gorgeous winner, congrats.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/16/2018 6:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Richard! :) Sandra
Date: 1/12/2018 7:45:00 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest. Your poem is perfectly beautiful from beginning to end. I love your image too !
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/16/2018 6:35:00 PM
Thank you, Constance! I enjoyed writing for your contest and I appreciate your lovely comments, congrats, and fine placement! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/12/2018 5:26:00 AM
beautiful sweet Sandra! I love it, congrats on you well deserved top win ;)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/16/2018 6:36:00 PM
Thank you, Laura Loo! :) Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/12/2018 1:14:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your first position win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/16/2018 6:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Subimal! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/11/2018 10:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra. Well done.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/16/2018 6:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/11/2018 9:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Sandra, so very beautiful.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/16/2018 6:37:00 PM
Thank you, Eve, for your lovely visit and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/31/2017 9:47:00 PM
Well done, Sandra. I am picturing myself on your lovely path.
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Date: 12/31/2017 6:36:00 AM
I can see this so vividly, such beautiful imagery.. All the best in the contest!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/16/2018 6:38:00 PM
Thank you once again, Sneha, for your visit and uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/31/2017 4:47:00 AM
Very nice rhyme and rhythm and the imagery is wonderful.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/16/2018 6:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rhoda, for your supportive comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/31/2017 1:24:00 AM
This is delightful, very atmospheric, and I'm sure that Constance will love it. happy new year to you and yours, Edwin. Regards, Viv
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Date: 12/30/2017 8:42:00 PM
Beautifully, vivid imagery! Love!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/16/2018 6:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anna, for your nice visit and supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 12/30/2017 7:38:00 PM
absolutely enchanting Sandra I am sure Constance will love this lovely poem:-) good luck in the contest:-) Sending you and your husband my very best wishes for 2018:-) hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/16/2018 6:42:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! I appreciate your positive and supportive comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/30/2017 7:11:00 PM
An enchanting and serene write illuminated with your brilliant imagery, Sandra. Superb. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/16/2018 6:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/30/2017 5:08:00 PM
Winter can be beautiful Sandra. Good write.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/16/2018 6:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Carlos! Much appreciated! Sandra

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