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A Sneaky Caterpillar- Nursery Rhyme

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I saw my healthy rose leaves, Vanishing fast, upsetting my peace. Looked here and there. Searched everywhere, To trace the reason, For this odd thing in spring season. Looked down at the rose stem, Looked up at the leaves’ hem. At last, saw a worm, green and creepy, Wriggling and wiggling so sneaky. Hiding under the rose leaf, Stealthy like a thief. I picked it outright, Wishing to destroy it downright. Without any second thought, Stamped it under my feet. Sorry, if I had not let it die, It would have turned into a butterfly. _____________________ March.9.2023 ~ Placed First~ Kid’s Creativity and Learning Poetry Contest Sponsor- Eve Roper

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Date: 3/25/2023 7:56:00 PM
So lovely, fun and cute my dear Valsa. I love it a lot with its moral lesson at the end. Congratulations on your first place win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 3/20/2023 6:06:00 PM
Valsa, congratulation on your win. Thank you so much for creating a cutie story children will enjoy for the contest. Many blessings to you. Eve
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Date: 3/25/2023 11:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve for choosing my poem for a first place win.
Date: 3/20/2023 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Valsa! :)
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Date: 3/20/2023 12:12:00 PM
- Back with a congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs
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Date: 3/20/2023 11:31:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. A cute story/write/picture. Have a blessed day..................
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Date: 3/20/2023 10:56:00 AM
This beautiful poetry may be read and enjoyed by people of all ages. I enjoyed reading this, Valsa, and congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/20/2023 8:47:00 AM
Lovely poem. Hearty Congratulations.
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Date: 3/14/2023 1:33:00 PM
Oh poor little guy! Great entry and good lesson as well, best of luck to you :)
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Date: 3/11/2023 5:00:00 AM
enjoyed reading your lovely nursery rhyme, Valsa. Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 3/9/2023 12:45:00 PM
Cute job you did of this. I can't see any of her pictures now. Too bad. I wanted to get inspired by them
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Date: 3/9/2023 6:35:00 AM
Yep, two rose bushes...one clearly labelled for Future Butterfly' Diners -- or Crawly's Bar-n-grill. Enchanting read, Valsa. Love it!
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Date: 3/9/2023 6:08:00 AM
This is a fantastic poem by Valsa. Maybe it's just a work of fiction! This exemplifies your skill in writing a subject that is notoriously challenging. We all make poor decisions from time to time.
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Date: 3/9/2023 5:07:00 AM
Sometimes we go for the wrong choice. Hugs.
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Date: 3/9/2023 3:41:00 AM
- Your roses were tempting, Valsa ... but it chose the wrong garden :))) - A great poem - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/9/2023 3:11:00 AM
Oh Valsa, I hope this one is pure fiction! Well written for what is a difficult genre (I found!)
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