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Change aint easy, lover and a hater times two. The quiet one, looking for psychedelic sound. Who am I? The Borrower, weeping unanswered questions. When you can’t get high enough, call the listener. Do you hear what I hear? Beyond your abyss, a billion coloured raindrops. Hands of light, pushing beyond your borders. Measure for measure what a fool am I. I reach towards her hand, consumed with each touch. She passes me a rose, red is the colour of passion. Sleeping beauty, dreaming with eyes open. Blessed hypnotist, tentative dancer, dark lover, tell me a sweet lie, beyond the walls of innocence. Water spirit, float into love’s arms. A sense of emptiness, I whispered your name. Blessed red door, lust, shame. Middle age white guy capturing freedom. Pain felt soul tears, the editing of me. Sweet scoundrel lies, rainbow coloured camouflage. Beyond the open door, the world unknown to me. Tell me what you don’t see. Getting what I really wanted, escaping gravity, filling up on empty. For Charlie’s “Collaboration of your Titles Poetry contest. Link https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/contests/collaboration_of_your_titles_13074 All titles no filler words.

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Date: 9/8/2019 9:32:00 PM
Hi Richard, Belated congratulations on your win in the contest, with this amazing write. If this was made from your titles, you have some of the most interesting. This couldn't have been easy, to knit them into a coherent poem. Love the content and the strong visions your words paint. Has to be a fave, Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/9/2019 2:02:00 AM
Thanks once again Mike, you made my day times two.
Date: 9/6/2019 6:38:00 AM
Well done Rick standing ovation!;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2019 6:50:00 AM
Thanks and a big hug.
Date: 8/28/2019 9:36:00 AM
Profound!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/28/2019 10:06:00 AM
;0) Just a bit of knitting.
Date: 7/28/2019 5:43:00 PM
This awesome poem deserves your first placement Rick! You arranged your titles into a brilliant work of art. Your ending was spectacular! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/29/2019 12:47:00 PM
Thanks Connie!
Date: 7/28/2019 2:40:00 PM
You came up with a profound verse using only your titles, Richard. I wish I could do free verse as well as you. I always just end up going back to meter and/or rhyme. This is superb!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/29/2019 12:47:00 PM
You can do anything you put your mind too poetically.
Date: 7/17/2019 9:54:00 PM
Congratulations Richard, on this win. Once again, there are no empty spaces between your words. Each moment connects perfectly to the next. ~ Brandy
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2019 8:48:00 AM
Thanks Brandy! Hugs Rick.
Date: 7/16/2019 10:41:00 PM
Wow, this is so smooth and a beauty of creation.. Got to read all the titles you have used.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/16/2019 10:57:00 PM
I would be honoured if you do.:0)
Date: 7/16/2019 7:33:00 PM
just wanted to say that although I am not reading and writing a lot of poems right now, just always love your poems.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/16/2019 10:57:00 PM
You are sweet Linda.
Date: 7/16/2019 12:08:00 PM
You did it! I see you won - and I can see why - you definitely merged a poetic piece together. I enjoyed the impressive read, Richard. Blessings ... CayCay
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/16/2019 12:09:00 PM
Thanks CayCay. Hugs Rick.
Date: 7/16/2019 7:07:00 AM
A brilliant job with just the titles Richard..Congrats on your win..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/16/2019 8:42:00 AM
Thanks Joseph.
Date: 7/15/2019 9:07:00 PM
This flows so smoothly, it reads like a fine wine, many congratulations on your much deserved win!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/16/2019 12:19:00 AM
Thanks Michelle.
Date: 7/15/2019 10:13:00 AM
Richard - Congrats! A masterful use of your titles in poetic form! Thanks for your kind comments re my win - Best to you - Bob
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/15/2019 10:39:00 AM
My pleasure Bob.
Date: 7/15/2019 8:43:00 AM
Great! CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Richard. Janice
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/15/2019 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Janice.
Date: 7/15/2019 12:22:00 AM
Hi Richard, I knew you would be on the winning list. Congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/15/2019 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Alexis, it was a pleasant surprise.
Date: 7/14/2019 9:19:00 PM
Richard, you did a great job on this my friend. I would have never known this was all of your titles if I had not sponsored the contest. Amazing and brilliant collaboration. Congratulations on your 1st place win! All the best..Charlie
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/14/2019 11:24:00 PM
Wow Charlie, thanks so much, you made my day!
Date: 7/14/2019 10:07:00 AM
Unbelievable! How is that possible? The miracle of turning headlines into poetry... Wait a sec, I've got some too! I must think about it) P.S. Oops, I see I'm late. It's a bit sad. Good luck in contest, Richard.
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Date: 7/12/2019 2:57:00 PM
Most excellent Richard, one to read over, and over again.
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Date: 7/11/2019 11:04:00 PM
No emptiness found here, within these words you have so beautifully tangled around each other. Incredibly done my friend. Your thoughts drew me in, and I felt each and every emotion. ~ Brandy
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/12/2019 7:34:00 AM
What a great comment. Thanks Brandy.
Date: 7/11/2019 3:51:00 PM
Interesting work and contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my p age. Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2019 5:40:00 PM
My pleasure Sara.
Date: 7/11/2019 2:25:00 PM
A great tapestry woven from your poem titles. Seems like a great mind exercise and so well metaphorically executed.....should place high. SuZ
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2019 3:28:00 PM
Thanks SuZ
Date: 7/11/2019 10:12:00 AM
Fascinating... what a trip this took me on. Should do well, dear. Thanks for your visit. Got a new poem up.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2019 10:26:00 AM
On my way.
Date: 7/11/2019 8:36:00 AM
sheer wizardry...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2019 8:59:00 AM
Thanks Harry!
Date: 7/10/2019 8:15:00 PM
Simply amazing, Richard! :) gw
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/10/2019 9:05:00 PM
Thanks Gershon.
Date: 7/10/2019 6:40:00 PM
fascinating, combination of words and images, love the last two lines.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/10/2019 6:52:00 PM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 7/10/2019 3:16:00 PM
One of the finest works I have seen for this contest, Richard. You've got SKILLS.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/10/2019 3:22:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.;0)
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