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A Path Chosen

In my city, downtown are many homeless, wandering the busy streets so aimless; one day, I saw my own brother begging, my brother's face held such a bleakness. I crossed the street my mind so confused, my brother homeless- oh my mind refused; but my reality was in an outstretched hand, I wept- how can I help my brother, I mused. I had to find him help- get him off the street, a place to live and good food each day to eat; that started me on a twisting journey, with help my brother is no longer downbeat. Since then, this girl has been on a mission, I talk to the homeless and hope a day brighten; with a partner, we pass out coffee and blankets, we give sandwiches and quickly they are eaten. Two days a month I help at a food bank- local, and often at a clothing depot I help when able; I always keep some change in my pocket, some days at the animal shelter- cats I cuddle. I suppose you could call me a good samaritan, but guess what- helping people is a lot of fun; every homeless person is some mother's baby, it seems that helping is a path I have chosen. __________________________ November 25, 2017 Poetry/Rubaiyat/A Path Chosen Copyright Protected, ID 17 9660-73-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym Written for the contest, The Good Samaritan sponsor, Craig Hawkins Fourth Place
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Date: 3/15/2018 2:00:00 AM
Very nice my dear, congratulations. Rubai is a very difficult form of poetry and you've done a great job.
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Date: 12/21/2017 4:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Wonderful to spread warmth in kind ways.
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Date: 12/21/2017 1:46:00 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/21/2017 12:32:00 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN, Constance! Janice
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Date: 11/25/2017 6:14:00 PM
I hope this poem inspires someone else to do what you do. I worked in an emergency assistance facility interviewing the needing folks 2-3 days a week for 21 years. If people only knew the joy they would get from volunteering.
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Date: 11/25/2017 8:27:00 AM
I loved this BW!! I have a special place in my heart for the homeless. I always wonder about their sad stories and what brought them to that point. I can't imagine seeing my own brother in that situation!!!! Best of luck in the contest! ~Judy
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