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A Museum Peace

memories depart- in shadows of yesterday sit echos of love- the silence invades my lonesome contemplation

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/24/2011 1:14:00 PM
meaning of poems are not clear though your effort is good
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:09:00 AM
Oh yes my friend 1st Place an excellent place to have this poem listed. I can see it as your words describe it. Congratulations Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2011 4:51:00 AM
I saw the picture and you, dear Brian have captured the essence of it so perfectly with this Choka masterpiece. Many congrats on your first place win! Sincerely, Elaine
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Date: 6/8/2011 5:47:00 PM
ohhh such a feeling of calm dispair! Great one Brian! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:03:00 PM
A well deserved win here Brian, all the best to you.
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Date: 6/8/2011 5:35:00 AM
An invasion of silence on contemplation... Cool. Great win Brian. Congratulations on top honor taken.
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Date: 6/8/2011 3:06:00 AM
congrats on your well deserved win in Rick Praise's contest
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Date: 6/7/2011 9:08:00 PM
Congrats Brian on your first place win in Rick's contest with this wonderful write luv..
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win xxx
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:10:00 PM
wow, first place!!! WAy to go!!
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Date: 6/7/2011 6:54:00 PM
What a perfect poem this is, Brian....deeply thoughtful, with a sense of melancholy and memory. Just wonderful ! Congratulations!
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Date: 6/7/2011 6:30:00 PM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of rick, brian
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:53:00 PM
This is beautiful and I love how you used the other spelling "peace" for such a cool effect!
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Date: 6/6/2011 5:39:00 PM
I love your Choka, Brian, I know of this lonesome contemplation also and I want to thank you so very much for my 3rd place win in the Your Choice Contest with my own Choka, called This Writer, I am very honored~~
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Date: 6/4/2011 5:02:00 PM
What a fantastic expression with images, brian. Soup Mail!!!
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Date: 6/4/2011 5:11:00 AM
Such a lovely depiction of a museum.
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Date: 6/4/2011 3:41:00 AM
the wonder of ancient culture depicted through artifacts... wonderful, brina! ..soup mail! :) huggs
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