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A Moment In Time

I stand at the doors of the funeral room and I am afraid, Afraid of how I am going to get through this long day; I knew the end was coming but nothing prepared me Mother, No one is ever ready for a beloved's last gasp of breath. Inside the room I gulp my sorrow and stand still and frozen, The room glows with hues of many rose pink flowers; In peace you lay all the ravages of illness have been erased, Beside your coffin I find myself looking and I weep. And I know this moment will be with me for all of my life, Just you and me alone with the scent of roses and quiet; I am filled with emotions and my body feels like a heavy stone, My heart is completely and totally shattered, forever broken. There is nothing I could have do to keep you in this world, Oh, I feel hallow inside and I hurt everywhere and so lost; But you have always taught me to be strong and to have courage, So, I whisper, love you Mommy and turn to greet the first visitor. _____________________________ October 30, 2015 Verse Written by Broken Wings For the contest, Dancing With Descriptions, sponsor, Casarah Nance Third Place

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Date: 11/10/2015 3:24:00 PM
My pleasure Constance. ;0)
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Constance La France
Date: 11/10/2015 5:55:00 PM
Richard, you are so kind and thoughtful ~
Date: 11/10/2015 11:34:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome win. SKAT
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Date: 11/10/2015 12:28:00 PM
Skat, thank you so much for visiting and for the congrats, appreciated ~
Date: 11/10/2015 7:57:00 AM
Again, BW, beautifully written.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/10/2015 12:29:00 PM
Thank you James ~
Date: 11/10/2015 4:41:00 AM
You are truly amazing Sweetheart you should Have been on top of the line THAT 7+++++++++++++++++++++++++ Make it an 8 No make it a10+++++
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Date: 11/10/2015 12:30:00 PM
AZ, you are the sweetest, thank you so much for the 10!
Date: 11/9/2015 10:14:00 PM
Yes, stepping into that room is always a tough step to conquer, BW. Well put, and congrats from me, Viv x
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Date: 11/10/2015 12:31:00 PM
Viv, oh yes it is, I can tell you have been there, what a horrible thing to have to endure, but we must, thanks so much for the visit and the congrats ~
Date: 11/9/2015 7:39:00 PM
Your sentimentality is so heart-warming. Well done, BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/10/2015 12:31:00 PM
Thanks so much Lin for the lovely comment ~
Date: 11/9/2015 6:36:00 PM
I expected to see this one. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/10/2015 12:32:00 PM
Thank you Richard for the forever support ~
Date: 11/9/2015 5:39:00 PM
Very heart-wrenching, Broken Wings, and I also know this pain. Congratulations on our wonderful win. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Constance La France
Date: 11/9/2015 5:40:00 PM
Thank you Sandra for the comment and the congrats and the 7 !
Date: 11/2/2015 2:59:00 PM
Emotional write BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/2/2015 6:00:00 PM
James, thanks for the visit, yes a very emotional write ~
Date: 11/1/2015 11:57:00 AM
This is such a lovely description showing your love for your mom. I can feel the sadness and wonder how I will do when my mom leaves this world. You captured the feelings of that moment in time. God Bless love phyl
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Constance La France
Date: 11/1/2015 1:44:00 PM
Hi Phyllis, thanks for the visit and the nice comment, it was really difficult ~
Date: 10/31/2015 9:16:00 AM
You capture this moment with sensitivity and clarity. Sorry for your loss.
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Date: 10/31/2015 12:59:00 PM
Thank you Richard for the visit and comment ~
Date: 10/30/2015 4:21:00 PM
I have had too many of those moments. The most recent of which, I cannot speak. But may this be a prayer for those, who in our hearts we keep. DMB
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Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2015 6:24:00 PM
DM, thanks for the comment and yes, sometimes these moments are very hard to speak of ~
Date: 10/30/2015 2:57:00 PM
Heart wrenching Constance. To lose a parent is one of the hardest thing to do.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2015 3:31:00 PM
Thanks for the visit Tim and comment, it is only one of the moments frozen in my mind, there are many ~
Date: 10/30/2015 2:40:00 PM
Oh Broken Wings this is truly heartbreaking my friend - the final stanza brought a huge lump in my throat - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2015 2:42:00 PM
Thank you Jan, this was a truly an emotional write, that is a moment forever etched in my heart ~
Date: 10/30/2015 2:40:00 PM
This is a moment in time, a moment frozen in heart that will forever haunt me ~
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