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A Mid-Autumn Scene

swirls of clouds trim sky leaves twirl as wind passes by . . . a squirrel stands still Sept. 8, 2022 for Tania Kitchin's Autumn In Nature - Haiku Poetry Contest for 'A HIKU PREMIER' Poetry Contest

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/9/2023 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Andrea! A perfect description of mid-autumn as the season changes and prepares for winter! Love your squirrel! Happy New Year. Blessings of joy and peace to you!

I Am Anaya

Date: 12/29/2022 4:23:00 PM

If a squirrel senses danger, they stand perfectly still as if they are invisible. They think they are invisible! Congratulations on your win Andrea! I enjoyed your haiku. ~ Hugs ~Anaya

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/28/2022 9:59:00 AM

Dear Andrea, it’s a pleasure to return to this lovely Autumn poem with my glad congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes for a happy new year, my friend.. ~Susan

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 12/28/2022 9:48:00 AM

Congratulatiions. Andrea: Love this sweet Autumn scene. SuZ

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/28/2022 9:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Love this fun Autumn write. Have A Merry/Happy/Healthy/Blessed New Year 2023....................

Len Gasun

Date: 10/10/2022 5:39:00 PM

Love the marvelous imagery in your haiku my dear friend Andrea. Congratulations on your well-deserved first win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/24/2022 1:02:00 PM

this is full of good things, andrea, the juxtaposition, and the cheeky bits of rhyme - i love a bit of rhyme in haiku - congrats on your top win.:)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/22/2022 8:01:00 PM

Dear Andrea, a perfect depiction of an Autumn moment in time. Your artistry shines with striking imagery and juxtaposition of movement and stillness and sky and earth. So beautifully composed. Congratulations for your wonderful placement in Tania's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/20/2022 9:53:00 PM

A lovely contrast of stillness and motion, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Evelyn

Eve Roper

Date: 9/20/2022 6:28:00 PM

Love the imagery, Andrea. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Blessings my friend

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 9/20/2022 3:59:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your first place win. Luv, SuZ.

Robert Warlov

Date: 9/18/2022 10:19:00 AM

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Ann Peck

Date: 9/18/2022 8:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! I love the squirrel standing still.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/18/2022 8:55:00 AM

thanks. I appreciate the comment on my last line

Md Johnson

Date: 9/18/2022 7:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. This was one of my favorites. -MDJ

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/18/2022 8:55:00 AM

wow, thanks so much.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/18/2022 7:24:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Andrea :)

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/18/2022 8:56:00 AM

thanks, Heidi

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/18/2022 6:59:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your win Andrea! Linda

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/18/2022 8:56:00 AM

Thanks, Linda.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/17/2022 7:35:00 PM

Squirrel standing still. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/18/2022 8:55:00 AM

Thanks so much.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/17/2022 5:17:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your first place win, love the imagery!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/18/2022 8:56:00 AM

thanks so much, Tania

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 9/17/2022 3:33:00 AM

Love this sweet image and the way ‘swirls,’ ‘twirl,’and, ‘squirrel,’ go together so perfectly.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/18/2022 8:56:00 AM

So glad you noticed I was doing that, Suz.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/15/2022 11:00:00 PM

Best wishes in the contest. I see Connie signed this!! Makes it even better)) Pangie xx

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/18/2022 8:57:00 AM

I'm glad for that, Pangie. Thanks.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/11/2022 7:37:00 AM

A faniliar scene each Autumn. Your imagery makes it real. Hugs, Bill

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/18/2022 8:57:00 AM

thanks, my friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/10/2022 7:37:00 AM

Amazing to catch a squirrel standing still. Way to go. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Sara

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/18/2022 8:58:00 AM

haha. but sometimes they just stand there!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/9/2022 1:42:00 PM

A lovely autumn scene Andrea. I miss seeing Squirrels. We don’t have them here in Hawaii. Have a great weekend. Blessings xxoo

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/18/2022 8:58:00 AM

Thanks, dear Connie, now in heaven. Hope you are seeing the outpouring of love for you here.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/9/2022 8:21:00 AM

Aww. The squirrel looking to store away supplies for winter. Lovely write Andrea! Linda

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/18/2022 8:58:00 AM

thanks, Linda.

Jennifer Walker

Date: 9/9/2022 7:25:00 AM

Beautiful, simply beautiful.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/18/2022 8:58:00 AM

thanks, Sis