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A Mid-Autumn Scene

swirls of clouds trim sky
leaves twirl as wind passes by . . .
a squirrel stands still

Sept. 8, 2022
for Tania Kitchin's Autumn In Nature - Haiku Poetry Contest

for 'A HIKU PREMIER' Poetry Contest

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Sam Kauffman Date: 1/9/2023 11:24:00 AM Congratulations on your win Andrea! A perfect description of mid-autumn as the season changes and prepares for winter! Love your squirrel! Happy New Year. Blessings of joy and peace to you! Login to Reply

I Am Anaya Date: 12/29/2022 4:23:00 PM If a squirrel senses danger, they stand perfectly still as if they are invisible. They think they are invisible! Congratulations on your win Andrea! I enjoyed your haiku. ~ Hugs ~Anaya Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 12/28/2022 9:59:00 AM Dear Andrea, it’s a pleasure to return to this lovely Autumn poem with my glad congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes for a happy new year, my friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Suzanne Delaney Date: 12/28/2022 9:48:00 AM Congratulatiions. Andrea: Love this sweet Autumn scene. SuZ Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/28/2022 9:36:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Love this fun Autumn write. Have A Merry/Happy/Healthy/Blessed New Year 2023.................... Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 10/10/2022 5:39:00 PM Love the marvelous imagery in your haiku my dear friend Andrea. Congratulations on your well-deserved first win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 9/24/2022 1:02:00 PM this is full of good things, andrea, the juxtaposition, and the cheeky bits of rhyme - i love a bit of rhyme in haiku - congrats on your top win.:) Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 9/22/2022 8:01:00 PM Dear Andrea, a perfect depiction of an Autumn moment in time. Your artistry shines with striking imagery and juxtaposition of movement and stillness and sky and earth. So beautifully composed. Congratulations for your wonderful placement in Tania's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 9/20/2022 9:53:00 PM A lovely contrast of stillness and motion, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Evelyn Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 9/20/2022 6:28:00 PM Love the imagery, Andrea. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Blessings my friend Login to Reply

Suzanne Delaney Date: 9/20/2022 3:59:00 AM Back to congratulate you on your first place win. Luv, SuZ. Login to Reply

Robert Warlov Date: 9/18/2022 10:19:00 AM *** Login to Reply

Ann Peck Date: 9/18/2022 8:07:00 AM Congratulations on your win! I love the squirrel standing still. Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/18/2022 8:55:00 AM thanks. I appreciate the comment on my last line

MD Johnson Date: 9/18/2022 7:49:00 AM Congratulations on your win. This was one of my favorites. -MDJ Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/18/2022 8:55:00 AM wow, thanks so much.

Heidi Sands Date: 9/18/2022 7:24:00 AM Congratulations for your win Andrea :) Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/18/2022 8:56:00 AM thanks, Heidi

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 9/18/2022 6:59:00 AM Back with congratulations on your win Andrea! Linda Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/18/2022 8:56:00 AM Thanks, Linda.

Christuraj Alex Date: 9/17/2022 7:35:00 PM Squirrel standing still. Beautiful. Congratulations! Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/18/2022 8:55:00 AM Thanks so much.

Tania Kitchin Date: 9/17/2022 5:17:00 PM Andrea, congratulations on your first place win, love the imagery! Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/18/2022 8:56:00 AM thanks so much, Tania

Suzanne Delaney Date: 9/17/2022 3:33:00 AM Love this sweet image and the way ‘swirls,’ ‘twirl,’and, ‘squirrel,’ go together so perfectly. Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/18/2022 8:56:00 AM So glad you noticed I was doing that, Suz.

Panagiota Romios Date: 9/15/2022 11:00:00 PM Best wishes in the contest. I see Connie signed this!! Makes it even better)) Pangie xx Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/18/2022 8:57:00 AM I'm glad for that, Pangie. Thanks.

Bill Baker Date: 9/11/2022 7:37:00 AM A faniliar scene each Autumn. Your imagery makes it real. Hugs, Bill Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/18/2022 8:57:00 AM thanks, my friend

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/10/2022 7:37:00 AM Amazing to catch a squirrel standing still. Way to go. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Sara Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/18/2022 8:58:00 AM haha. but sometimes they just stand there!!

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/9/2022 1:42:00 PM A lovely autumn scene Andrea. I miss seeing Squirrels. We don’t have them here in Hawaii. Have a great weekend. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/18/2022 8:58:00 AM Thanks, dear Connie, now in heaven. Hope you are seeing the outpouring of love for you here.

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 9/9/2022 8:21:00 AM Aww. The squirrel looking to store away supplies for winter. Lovely write Andrea! Linda Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/18/2022 8:58:00 AM thanks, Linda.

Jennifer Walker Date: 9/9/2022 7:25:00 AM Beautiful, simply beautiful. Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/18/2022 8:58:00 AM thanks, Sis

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