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A Little Aliteration

Meaning? Maybe so maybe Not necessarily. Know any Good jokes? Good job! Golly gee Whiz! Whatever. Where were we? Reality runs rampant wrecking Balls bring blues. Big bold brilliant blues, baby Teeth talking trash, telling Lies lazily, longingly, lusciously licking Wounds. Whoa! Where were we? Cautiously coming closer claiming Deepening desire devilishly drawing Semi-circles, selectively seductive, sensuous spirals of Expectant exposure, expertly extinguished at the First flash of fear or feeling foolish about feeling Well, well. Where were we? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is the third poem I posted on Soup. Was the fourth po that I'd ever written that wasn't for a grade.

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Date: 1/29/2012 8:17:00 AM
It's cute and you got reading it all through... congrats on this fourth. :)
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Date: 1/26/2012 12:09:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. It is entertaining reading.
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Date: 1/24/2012 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Nancy. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2012 7:34:00 PM
Fabulous freakin' feature for fun. Congrats on the feature.
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Date: 11/18/2011 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Any Poem From Your First 100 On P S" contest Nancy. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2011 6:31:00 PM
Congratulations on our third place win with this great aliteration! Lori
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Date: 11/17/2011 6:08:00 PM
Congrats Nancy on a great third place win with this rare beauty poetry...luv..
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Date: 11/17/2011 12:01:00 PM
Unique way to aliterate Susan, it got you a worthy three, congratulations on your win. Agpe, Moses
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Date: 11/17/2011 10:11:00 AM
you should have seen my 4th poem! mine was so awful! congrats to you on a non-awful WINNING poem :) it has a rhythm to it, a jive to it, like i could almost imagine you speaking it out loud at a cafe, even though i have no idea what you sound like in person. this poem definitley has a voice though, and it's unique.
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Date: 11/17/2011 8:40:00 AM
You have a bite, that is all your own, very fun to read and makes for clever poetry! Congrats, Nancy!! Enjoyed!
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Date: 11/17/2011 8:22:00 AM
Very edgy. Kind of draws you in. Congratulations on your win. Well done.
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