Notes About The Poem

Originally published: 24th August 2022

Image: Gordon Johnson from Pixabay

Childhood innocence and 'the rosy recollection' of time and places past.


A Land Like Oz

I knew a land not far from here
where stories kissed goodnight
 - a land like Oz before the storm
when all was black and white.

Yet now as ruby tinted mists
add colour to that time
 - a distant land of spires and farms
awakes as church bells chime.

I see a land beyond the clouds
where people stop to talk
- a land of blue remembered hills
where poets often walk.

I see a land from way up high
where children still believe
 - a land of snow where brass bands play
on every Christmas Eve.

Those happy highways where I went
had homes with open doors 
 - and lemon drops and chimney tops
in worlds that had no wars.
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Debole Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 12:08 PM
Gary, Very sweet poem. Still hoping for a world that welcomes diversity and leaves the idea of a war behind. - Gail
Radice Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 10:35 PM
Thanks Gail. The perfect idyll that sadly never was and sadly never will be. But there's always hope, dreams and poetry. Cheers - Gary
Canerdy Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 7:35 PM
If only . . . Gary, SO well done, CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Radice Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 6:02 AM
Thanks Janice. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest too. Cheers - Gary
rynbrandt Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 7:21 AM
Hello Gary! I'm the art editor and an editorial assistant for Sonder online magazine, a quarterly magazine by Conservatarian Press. Conservatarian Press is a boutique publisher that is about two years old. I'm also an editor there for women's fiction. This Oz poem would really pair nicely with one of the short stories we are publishing in our winter 2024 issue. Any chance we might add your work (the first two parts) if we properly cite? Also, I'd encourage you to submit poems to us for pub!
Radice Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 10:33 PM
Hi Jen. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I'll send you a Soupmail later today if that's OK? Cheers - Gary
Kingston Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 10:02 PM
I wish to be in this magical place. I lived in a huge neighborhood growing up and your beautiful last stanza reminds of my Oz. No social media of any kind. Climbing trees, hiding, picking berries. Today we prayed in mass for all the people of Israel being killed horrifically. "where are those worlds that have no wars?" I might share it with my childhood friend, Megan Glad to have found.
Radice Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 1:40 AM
Hi Marikate. Thank you for your lovely comments. I think if most of us had the chance we would all opt to living in that magical place of memories and long hot summers. I hope that if you do share this with Megan that she, too enjoys its sentiment. Cheers - Gary
Bowring Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 12:14 AM
Had to read this one Gary as ‘Oz’ is one of my all time favourite films and I’m very glad I did. I love it! Simply gorgeous. Love the line, ‘ yet now as ruby tinted mist’ (reference to her shoes?) So beautifully written. Wish we could all live in a happy, peaceful land. Thank you for this delightful read. Have a wonderful day.
Radice Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 12:36 AM
Hi Christina. Yes! The ruby tinted mists are a reference to her shoes. Sometimes when we look back we tend to add colour to the times as we remember them so fondly. Thanks for your visit. Cheers - Gary
Meadows Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 5:30 AM
A lovely poem. Well written
Radice Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 2:33 AM
Thank you Jeanette. I appreciate your visit and comments. Cheers - Gary
Peck Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 10:07 AM
Such a beautiful poem; so sad those things go away as we grow up.
Radice Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 6:00 AM
Agreed Ann. Oh for the chance to live in the idyll that was Forever The Past. I turn 61 soon and am beginning to sound like the old guy I've become. :) Cheers - Gary
Debole Avatar
September 29, 2022 at 5:31 PM
Gary, It would be nice to be able to live in a Utopian world, but even Oz had its negative aspects. Your descriptive phrases are delightfully unique and mentally pleasing. - Gail
Radice Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 12:29 PM
Thanks Gail. Yes, Oz had its negative aspects. Whenever we remember 'the good times' it tends to be out of context with everything else that was going on at the time doesn't it? Cheers - Gary
Delaney Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 5:50 PM
I wish we could return to that world but it has all been blown away. Enjoyed the fable for a moment. SuZ
Radice Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 9:42 PM
Hi Suz. When I look back I always remember a slower life. No world wide Web meant people not venting and / or transferring their anger onto others and overall, just more patience with things. We have lost that. We are bombarded with messages and a lifestyle that tells us what to think, not how to think. Cheers - Gary
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September 19, 2022 at 6:15 AM
I loved the wonderful Wizard of Oz and love your poem too Gary, an easy read sure to please and it flows and rhymes so well… Belle
Radice Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 2:11 PM
The film is a classic isn't it? I grew up with it despite it being made in '39 due to the fact that it was first shown on UK TV Christmas in '75 and nearly every year after that. :) Cheers - Gary
John Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 3:24 AM
Nice land to be in, Gary. Pity we have terrible wars. Anyway, enjoy the lemon drops - I haven't had any of those for years!
Radice Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 4:27 AM
Agreed Andrew. Nostalgia always adds that warm glow to times past doesn't it? For Lemon Drops read Sherbert Lemons for me. :) I'll nip over to your poems later today Andrew.. Cheers - Gary
Flaherty Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 12:26 PM
Gary I myself also love this here , here It flows like the green green grass of what probably for Ukrainians used to feel like home Oz World before War began and had an open door policy and chimneys without funeral smoke plumes eminence being dispersed Great Stuff Sir
Radice Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 9:09 AM
Thanks for the read and your comments Christopher and yes - life for those you speak of was so much better before the war. Cheers - Gary
Baker Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 4:12 PM
A p-leasant and enjoyable poem, Gary. Thanks for some cheerful poetry. Bill
Radice Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 11:26 PM
Thanks Bill. Whenever I look back with my poetry it always appears more cheerful..The naivety of then versus the realities of now. :) Cheers - Gary
Mcintosh Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 2:55 PM
WOW. Just love this! Awesome write. God bless you. Love, Gina
Radice Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 11:13 PM
Thank you Gina, I'm glad you like the poem. Cheers - Gary
Watson Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 11:46 AM
I rarely visit this site these days,Gary but I happened to 'drop by' and just had to comment on how much I appreciated your wonderful poem both for the sentiment expressed and the musical flow.Thank you!
Radice Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 12:08 PM
Thanks so much Wendy for your lovely comments. I hope all is well and sincerely hope that you visit the site more often so that all at Poetry Soup can enjoy your own wonderful poetry. Cheers - Gary
Watt Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 6:21 PM
Gary, in my opinion nobody writes nostalgia like you do. This intersection of Housman and Baum is fascinating to observe. Your patchwork quilt of Oz (ruby tinted, black and white, lemon drops, chimney tops) and Shropshire Lad (spires and farms, blue remembered hills, happy highways) creates a melancholy-tinged tapestry of wistful remembrances. But as Housman wrote, we can't go back again. Beautifully written. Cheers ~ John
Radice Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 11:51 PM
2 / 2: I meant to add John that I've also used the line 'way up high' and referred to the line "..where the clouds are far behind me" from "Somewhere Over The Rainbow" For some reason that song has just stayed with me all this time and reminds me of my very happy childhood when the film seemed to be shown every Christmas on TV during the 70s. What's so sad of course is that the film was full of childhood innocence but behind the scenes things weren't too rosy for Judy Garland with her treatment by MGM: She was allegedly told to lose weight for her role and given amphetamines in order to do so. Cheers - Gary
Radice Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 12:14 PM
1 / 2 Hi John. I don't know what it is about nostalgia that has me putting pen to paper.I have one of those memories that remembers so much from childhood but has difficulty remembering what I did last week! :) I truly appreciate your continued encouragement and support.
Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 3:20 PM
I was a child of the 50s,60's and 70s. There were always the wars, but you are so right. Our cultural values were better than what I see thrown at kids today. You sure can write a great poem!
Radice Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 1:52 AM
I appreciate your comments Andrea - thanks so much. It makes this hobby of mine feel all the more worthwhile. Cheers - Gary
Peck Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 2:57 PM
Gary, your poem is wonderful, especially the last stanza. If only we could live like that again. I'm faving. Pretty soon, I'll have a book of your poems faved :)
Radice Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 1:51 AM
Thanks Ann. Lovely of you to say so and thanks for the fav. Cheers - Gary
Kauffman Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 9:30 AM
Absolutely wonderful Gary. You have masterfully integrated images of Oz with your childhood innocence into a landscape where war does not exist and we, all of us, long to visit and stay! You do have the poet's ability to tame the wild word into a vision. Congratulations on your win! This is a fav for me! Cheers!
Radice Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 10:08 AM
Sam, your comments are always a treat to read. Thanks so much for the fav. In addition to 'The Wizard Of Oz' I also refer to the English poet A E Housman's poem: "A Shropshire Lad".. "Into my heart an air that kills From yon far country blows: What are those blue remembered hills, What spires, what farms are those? That is the land of lost content, I see it shining plain, The happy highways where I went and cannot come again." Cheers - Gary
Volumes Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 8:45 AM
Opening your poem in Kansas, and taking us through a child's world of make believe, is such a delight Gary. If only it was a reflection of real life with lemon drops and no wars. Thank you for the journey you created, it was a wonderful read.
Radice Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 12:57 AM
Thanks Wendy. I loved the transition from b&w to colour in the film and wanted to introduce that feel in my poem. I'm glad you liked it. Cheers - Gary.
Ray Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 7:23 AM
if wishes were horses....the world would come to know the heart and depth of this poem and ride into a joyous sunset....excellent job
Radice Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 8:20 AM
Timothy, your very generous comment qualifies as a poem in itself in my book. Thank you. Cheers - Gary
M  Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 9:32 AM
An enchanting beautifully written poem Gary! Loved it! Debx
Radice Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 3:08 AM
The lemon drops line comes from the song 'over the rainbow' :)
M  Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 3:00 AM
Hey Gary…I think we all tend to look back with rose tinted glasses or perhaps look back and just see the positives in the years gone by? Or maybe times were better , simpler , less complicated and more fun….who knows!! Your poem is thought provoking Gary. I love the lemon drops and chimney tops line….ending the poem perfectly. You did good hehe!! Debx
Radice Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 1:08 AM
Thanks Deb. I really appreciate your comments on this as I'm really happy with it. I'm never comfortable explaining my poems as I feel it makes me sound pretentious or some other word that describes such..and I may not even need to explain this one ..but..Hey! I'm going to anyway :) It's my take on viewing the past through rose tinted glasses and questioning as to whether everything was better in the 'good old days'. I'm sometimes guilty of adopting a 'misty-eyed' melancholy and wistful approach to the past in my writings (particularly as I get older) in much the same way I think English poet A E Housman was with 'Into my heart an air that kills' (From 'A Shropshire Lad') Cheers - Gary
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