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A Hunter Boy's Penitence

A hunter boy born to God fearing parents Was taught from his very early childhood; Failure to attend church on Sundays needed penitence As it was an act of defying God and dishonoring His parenthood The boy faithfully took the advice to his heart But his fad for hunting was too irresistible to put away Brazenly, he skipped church on one Sabbath day And roamed through the jungle looking for a prey Like one on a treasure hunt, excited and gay He dreamed of hunting down a bird or beast with his dart In wild enthusiasm, he clambered up every hill ad vale Exploring every cranny through bush and brake As he turned to a dark corner, following a trail There stood a lion and no doubt, his valor did shake He started shaking and shivering in great fright On an impulse, the boy turned backwards to run Alas, he slipped off and rolled down the peak With the beast chasing him in hot pursuit, like a demon Crashing on a boulder, his ribs broke with a creak With dizziness, he knew, he would collapse straight Unable to run or even move, he writhed in pain. Trembling from the crown of his head, To the soles of his feet, as the lion closed in He realized with a shock, he would soon be dead And knew his disobedience was the sole cause for his fate In great desperation, he cried out with all his heart “Lord, I am so sorry for my willful omission Please forgive me and save me from being torn apart Make this lion a good Christian with all compassion” And rid me safe from this miserable state Lo, the clouds parted in the heavens with a creak And a beam of light shone down on the aggressor The lion skidded to a halt and suddenly turning back Fell on its knees and clasped its paws together As if it was full of contrition for its wicked act In thankfulness, like a good Christian of benevolence The lion drew the sign of the cross for God’s grace to overpower And recited in a tone of great reverence and forbearance “Father in Heaven, bless this food that I am about to devour!” Before it sprang, through some strange providence, the boy escaped intact ------------------------------------------------ April.8.2022 Tall Tales.2. Poetry Contest ababc, dedec…. Tail rhymed tall tale Sponsor- Jeff Kyser

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Date: 5/5/2022 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 5/5/2022 8:09:00 AM
Valsa, this is quite a story! Thanks for letting the boy escape! CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Date: 5/5/2022 6:44:00 AM
A very nice tale, thanks for your entry!
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Date: 4/14/2022 4:59:00 PM
WOW! Great tale, Valsa. Exciting with a great twist at the end. Looks like a winner to me, but a contest is a contest, we'll have to wait and see. :-) Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Bill
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Date: 4/12/2022 2:18:00 PM
Marvelously penned
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Date: 4/10/2022 5:59:00 PM
A gripping tale from beginning to end, so brilliantly composed... best wishes dear Valsa
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Date: 4/9/2022 2:14:00 PM
This is very well written dear Valsa, winning wishes are being send your way, thanks for sharing your talent :)
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Date: 4/9/2022 11:30:00 AM
Brilliant story telling Valsa, you have a great imagination. Good luck in the contest and hope your weekend is an enjoyable one. Tom
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Date: 4/9/2022 10:56:00 AM
Enjoyed, but there are no Christian cats; I ain't lion! Aloha!
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Date: 4/9/2022 10:52:00 AM
Well told. But a couple days latter, the lad was out hunting again.... And the lion, out there, with boy on his mind. It is the riddle of, boy, lion, and the Divine. Excellent write, Vijay. Enjoyed very much.
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Date: 4/9/2022 8:47:00 AM
Valsa, you had my whole attention from start to finish. Yes, that was a great tale! When a lion asks for prayers before eating, it's an example of humility and respect for the cub. This piece of writing is wonderful. Best wishes for a win dear friend.
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Date: 4/9/2022 5:05:00 AM
That was a tall tale alright! I like the lesson the boy learned---and how the lion asked for blessings before meal. You kept my attention from start to end--a fun read, indeed!
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Date: 4/9/2022 2:06:00 AM
Quite a take, with moral lesson, too. Fir a moment I thought Nr. Lion would turn into a sphinx. If the boy escaped, the lesson becomes: pray your prey becomes a Christian who prays! Shalom shalom. It was fun
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Date: 4/9/2022 1:49:00 AM
Now was that a tall tale or not. I'd like to see a lion make the sign of the cross. Great poem. Best for a win.
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