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A Futile Death

A Futile Death by Wilma Neels Flying over the place that use to be my home I’m glancing at the once blue green seascape Transformed to a murky coal black scene A faucet has been opened When everything went up in flames Amidst all the confusion I lost everything I loved Flying over, a silent prayer is prayed Please keep them safe Please close the hole This is the only home we know, As I sit on a rock The sadness overwhelms me, As my sister slips away She has lost the battle The oil slick has gone thicker It’s gaining power with every hour I pray dear Lord of heaven and earth May her final breath not be in vain I flap my wings in a silent salute Farewell dear sister, you will be missed May this be the last time, I witness such ugliness… Written: 24 June 2010 Contest: Why oh Why? Sponsored by: Constance ~ A Rambling Poet

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Date: 10/25/2010 2:22:00 PM
This read touched my heart Wilma.Congrats on your 2nd.place win in this Why oh Why contest.Teresa
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Date: 10/19/2010 5:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest...Sara
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Date: 10/10/2010 1:20:00 PM
If the person lived a life of victory, the death can never be futile. This is a solemn but great piece! Congratulations on your second place win!
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Date: 10/9/2010 2:09:00 PM
beautiful entry, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/9/2010 7:03:00 AM
Many congratulations Wilma on your win in Constance's contest 'Why oh Why' have a lovely weekend >> James
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Wilma. Love,Carol
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:20:00 AM
Congrats, Wilma. Outstanding write. Thoughts of our feathered friends well captured. Great job. Enjoyed. Well deserved win. Have a super weekend. xxxRalph
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:20:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Wilma
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:07:00 AM
Oh so sad but very beautiful.. so sorry for your loss if this is your own story..congrats on your win Wilma..well deserved..Take care~Deb
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Date: 10/7/2010 11:44:00 PM
Congrats Wilma on your win in Constance's contest..with this extra special entry my dear friend.. enjoy this happy weekend with luv...
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Date: 10/7/2010 10:37:00 PM
I don't know how I missed this, Wilma! Truly sad.Wow..I'm soo sorry, my friend...My congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest....Hope you're doing well, Wilma...Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/7/2010 9:07:00 PM
A sad poem dear Wilma and very touching. many congratulations.
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Date: 10/7/2010 8:58:00 PM
Congratulations, Wilma on 2nd place in my contest, Why Oh Why, ths poem truly touched my heart~~
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Date: 6/25/2010 9:03:00 PM
imaginative approach!
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Date: 6/25/2010 7:29:00 PM
wow, this is a really good way to express the sadness of the event. seen thru the eyes of a bird. VERY good, Wilma. You are a talent. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/25/2010 4:37:00 PM
what a beautiful poem... Im in aww... thank you for sharing this...Michael
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Date: 6/25/2010 2:13:00 PM
Your poem brought tears to my eyes, Wilma. The beautiful use of personification allows the reader to view the devastation through the eyes of this sad sea bird. God bless you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/25/2010 12:43:00 PM
thanks for the comment you left on"Forward" Wilma, and please believe how sorry I was to hear about your friend, I only hope you found a little comfort in my words, as I find comfort in the belief that we all meet again as "kindred spirits" must always do. best wishes June xx
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Date: 6/25/2010 11:26:00 AM
major chills as I read this one, Wilma--what a tragedy this oil spill really is, and it is just painful to see all those wildlife suffering-- I sure do hope you entered this in the contest! --nikko :)
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Date: 6/25/2010 9:53:00 AM
Powerfully written, Wilma...Great writing! Kisses, Emily
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Date: 6/25/2010 7:02:00 AM
Wow.......a strong image there Wilma, how sad, but very well written....love J. xx
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