A Futile Death

A Futile Death by Wilma Neels

Flying over the place that use to be my home
I’m glancing at the once blue green seascape 
Transformed to a murky coal black scene 
A faucet has been opened
When everything went up in flames
Amidst all the confusion 
I lost everything I loved
Flying over, a silent prayer is prayed
Please keep them safe
Please close the hole
This is the only home we know,

As I sit on a rock
The sadness overwhelms me, 
As my sister slips away
She has lost the battle 
The oil slick has gone thicker 
It’s gaining power with every hour
I pray dear Lord of heaven and earth
May her final breath not be in vain
I flap my wings in a silent salute
Farewell dear sister, you will be missed
May this be the last time,
I witness such ugliness…


Written: 24 June 2010
Contest: Why oh Why?
Sponsored by: Constance ~ A Rambling Poet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 2:22 PM
This read touched my heart Wilma.Congrats on your 2nd.place win in this Why oh Why contest.Teresa
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October 19, 2010 at 5:11 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest...Sara
Augustus Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 1:20 PM
If the person lived a life of victory, the death can never be futile. This is a solemn but great piece! Congratulations on your second place win!
Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 2:09 PM
beautiful entry, congrats on your win in the contest
Fraser Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 7:03 AM
Many congratulations Wilma on your win in Constance's contest 'Why oh Why' have a lovely weekend >> James
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your win Wilma. Love,Carol
Taylor Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 5:20 AM
Congrats, Wilma. Outstanding write. Thoughts of our feathered friends well captured. Great job. Enjoyed. Well deserved win. Have a super weekend. xxxRalph
Mehta Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 5:20 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Wilma
Wilson Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 4:07 AM
Oh so sad but very beautiful.. so sorry for your loss if this is your own story..congrats on your win Wilma..well deserved..Take care~Deb
Sweetheart Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 11:44 PM
Congrats Wilma on your win in Constance's contest..with this extra special entry my dear friend.. enjoy this happy weekend with luv...
Haick Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 10:37 PM
I don't know how I missed this, Wilma! Truly sad.Wow..I'm soo sorry, my friend...My congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest....Hope you're doing well, Wilma...Love, Audrey
Mannan Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 9:07 PM
A sad poem dear Wilma and very touching. many congratulations.
La France Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 8:58 PM
Congratulations, Wilma on 2nd place in my contest, Why Oh Why, ths poem truly touched my heart~~
Byrne Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 9:03 PM
imaginative approach!
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 7:29 PM
wow, this is a really good way to express the sadness of the event. seen thru the eyes of a bird. VERY good, Wilma. You are a talent. Luv, Andrea
Falotico Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 4:37 PM
what a beautiful poem... Im in aww... thank you for sharing this...Michael
Devonshire Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 2:13 PM
Your poem brought tears to my eyes, Wilma. The beautiful use of personification allows the reader to view the devastation through the eyes of this sad sea bird. God bless you. Love, Carolyn
Fone Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 12:43 PM
thanks for the comment you left on"Forward" Wilma, and please believe how sorry I was to hear about your friend, I only hope you found a little comfort in my words, as I find comfort in the belief that we all meet again as "kindred spirits" must always do. best wishes June xx
K. Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 11:26 AM
major chills as I read this one, Wilma--what a tragedy this oil spill really is, and it is just painful to see all those wildlife suffering-- I sure do hope you entered this in the contest! --nikko :)
R Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 9:53 AM
Powerfully written, Wilma...Great writing! Kisses, Emily
Fone Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 7:02 AM
Wow.......a strong image there Wilma, how sad, but very well written....love J. xx
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