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A fragile rose now in its place it's the yearning for just a trace, "Take me. I'm yours", returned but naught. In your thoughts I'd be frail and fraught, your soft touch did more than erase. Sustenance deep in from someplace, holds out for passion and rhythm grace, a flirtatious glance to be caught. A fragile rose. Arid, fractured, shadowed embrace. Thirsty, melt with the sun, and lace the versed world around and joy brought intimacy it once had sought. It has newly sprung and gave chase. A fragile rose. 7/25/2018 Picture 2

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Date: 8/31/2018 1:15:00 AM
A very lovely entry deserving of your high 2nd placement Eve! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/30/2018 8:06:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you again on your win again. Well done.
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Date: 8/29/2018 3:58:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara..Creative way to go..
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Date: 8/28/2018 11:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Eve.
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Date: 8/28/2018 6:20:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Date: 8/28/2018 5:46:00 PM
"Springing from a fracture place holding out for rhythm grace"..Congrats on your win Eve
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Date: 8/1/2018 1:28:00 PM
Such a delicate rhyme for a fragile rose, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/31/2018 3:42:00 PM
A lovely sonnet, Eve.
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Date: 7/28/2018 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Beautiful, poignant. Well done!
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Date: 7/28/2018 7:09:00 PM
Congrats Eve on your win..lovely poem.
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Date: 7/28/2018 7:01:00 PM
A wonderful rondeau, Eve, congrats on your win and best of luck in the next. John
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Date: 7/28/2018 1:45:00 PM
the fragile rose....it simply grows....and Beauty glows....while negativity slows....then inspiration shows....what everyone knows....positivity always flows....evident through prose....very inspiring mrs roper....;)
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