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A Dance of Angels the Reply

Oppressed by a dark sense of impending doom A dance of golden angels alight from the clouds Bursts of shiny, rosy, frothy bubbles clear Unveiling a lost, now remembered land Of love and laughter and sparkling stars 6/20/22 Copyright © Robert Gorelick | Year Posted 2022 Impressed by their light I walked into the gloaming A lover, eager to find my soulmate in this shroud Pivotal stars of silver, spangling close and near The angels have found me dancing in remembered land adjacent, I am laughter I am love I am free Mystic Rose : The Reply

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Date: 6/22/2022 3:02:00 PM
Two very fine works. A joy to read. Thank you. "Pivotal stars of silver, spangling close and near" Outstanding!
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Date: 6/22/2022 5:32:00 AM
Both...simply beautiful, dear Rose... Lifted me to a higher place.
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Date: 6/22/2022 12:40:00 AM
Both so lovely!!!!!!
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Date: 6/21/2022 4:28:00 AM
Enjoyed the peaceful and loving vibes you convey in the presence of angels. Much joy dancing with love and laughter, my friend.
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Date: 6/21/2022 1:16:00 AM
This is lovely, Vie, heavenly is the word that comes to mind.
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Date: 6/20/2022 7:04:00 PM
This is excellent. A beautiful blending response. Nice lines throughout all of it :)
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Date: 6/20/2022 5:19:00 PM
I love the energy and the depth of your lovely poem!
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