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(continued) Checking every overpass they came upon But they never found him. They went to the pantry that he had spoken of But the folks there said that no one like him had come in that day And that they hadn't sold any portable gas cans. They gave all the supplies to the local shelter And the young lady checked many times in the weeks to come But the man was never found. She began to wonder at times if she had imagined the whole thing If maybe the car had stalled and she'd fallen asleep Then dreamed the whole thing and awakened to continue on. Slowly, over time, it passed from her thoughts. Then, late that Spring she took her car to the self-wash near her apartment And when she started to wash the rear end of her car She noticed something unusual ... There, in the dirty film on her rear bumper, was a message A finger-written message of Christmas kindness that simply read: "No worries - your angel is watching" She got in her car and drove off with a smile And a very warm heart ... Leaving the dirty bumper just the way it was. * SIXTH PLACE in "The Good Samaritan" Poetry Contest, Craig Hawkins, Sponsor. *

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Date: 12/21/2017 12:55:00 PM
Wonderful end to a heartwarming story, Greg. I REALLY DO believe in angels. Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 1:21:00 PM
I do, too, Janice ... blessings and thanks to you, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 12/9/2017 5:41:00 PM
Was this patterned after the true story recently on the news - a homeless man using his only $20 to get gas for a stranded woman. He was "outed" and had money poured into his life. He won't be homeless any more. You did a fine work on this.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2017 5:53:00 PM
Thank you so much - yes! That's what gave me the idea, though I wanted to take it in a spiritual direction ... last I heard that guy's "fund-me" page had over $350K!! Kindness and sacrifice is ALWAYS rewarded, though not always in the time or ways we expect ... the Universe MUST stay in balance, and I believe love/kindness is the one force that transcends time. Blessings! :-)
Date: 12/9/2017 5:35:00 AM
Love it!!! Great ending :) We all have angels watching over us <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2017 5:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Judy! :-) <3

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