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A Change Of Heart - Etheree

                         Change

                      had brought

                          October

                     and you to me.

             With words from a heart

              so far from my own, but

        still so close when I read them,

   feel them, see them, bringing changes.

         I, like the leaves, am falling fast,  

hoping that you, like the earth, will catch me.









September 23rd, 2015

"For Love Of October" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/22/2018 7:06:00 AM
A lovely write.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/1/2018 7:19:00 PM
Thank you very, very much :)
Date: 5/26/2016 1:22:00 PM
A wonderful piece. I love this beautiful share
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/14/2016 10:20:00 PM
Thank you, Funom. I am so glad you liked this one :)
Date: 2/22/2016 4:06:00 AM
A Great etheree, Kelly. Love the last two lines. Elaine
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/11/2016 12:44:00 PM
Thank you very much, Elaine. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem :)
Date: 1/22/2016 10:28:00 PM
Such a beautiful flow to this one... lovely phrasing and imagery Kelly. Well done! Best wishes, Keith
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/1/2016 8:51:00 PM
I appreciate your nice comments, Keith. Thank you very much!
Date: 11/3/2015 6:52:00 PM
wow better & bettwr Kelly! Light & Love
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/13/2015 7:16:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie! I appreciate your encouragement. It means a lot to get a "wow" from you :)
Date: 10/30/2015 7:57:00 AM
splendid``` great``` beautiful``` awesome and well expressed. As always, beautiful lines from a creative mind. Definitely a 7
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/7/2015 10:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Funom. I truly appreciate your always kind comments!
Date: 10/20/2015 8:33:00 PM
Wow! Powerful in such few words. I love the fall so any analogy about leaves, or crisp breezes I adore. Great job :) -LU
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/3/2015 5:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Laura... Fall is my favorite season and it has been wonderful to see so many Autumn themed poems being posted here :)
Date: 10/20/2015 7:57:00 PM
I will catch you, I couldn't stand to see you fall....your words never fail to glorify your wall....your talents touch hearts while piercing the mind....every time I read, I am glad I took the time....;)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/3/2015 5:22:00 PM
I really appreciate your lovely comments and kind words, Eric. Thank you! :)
Date: 10/12/2015 7:48:00 PM
Hi came back to read this a few times, just thought be nice to let you know!! Loved this poem!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/14/2015 11:56:00 PM
Hi there Arthur, thanks for coming back to read my poem once again. So glad to know you are enjoying it :)
Date: 10/7/2015 12:32:00 PM
this is charmingly designed and expressed, dear kelly...i like the impact of your last line... very nice!.. huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/14/2015 4:12:00 PM
Thank you for reading, Nette. I really appreciate your nice comments, as always :)
Date: 10/4/2015 9:05:00 PM
Love this terrific write of yours Kelly. Bearing ones heart is a strong trait and you radiate strength. Awesome Etheree! Hugs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/14/2015 2:44:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly, Cecilia. I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem... Hugs :)
Date: 10/4/2015 5:15:00 PM
Love this.........!! (like the earth .....will catch you!) :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/14/2015 2:41:00 PM
Thank you once again for your nice comments, Carrie :)
Date: 10/4/2015 1:42:00 PM
Hey, Kelly, thanks for reading my poetry recently. I will check quickly to see if you have any recent ones I have not seen yet, but I don't think so. Have a lovely day. I am!!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/13/2015 7:52:00 PM
I'm glad to hear that, Andrea. It's been a good day for me, too... Thank you for taking the time to read my poems :)
Date: 10/4/2015 1:40:00 PM
Kelly, congratulations on your win with this beauty and I also want to thank you so much for my awesome placement in your Pirate contest, I am so honored...
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/13/2015 7:50:00 PM
You're very welcome. Thank you for taking part in my contest and for your kind comments :)
Date: 10/4/2015 11:39:00 AM
Dear Kelly Congrats on your winning poem here my souper friend, bravo it's so light and sweet simply a pleasure to read, it's totally a refreshing completely marvelous, and thanks for your review on my halloween poems, I enjoy doing this for this one of my favorite seasons of the year, Halloween rocks in my book, cheri
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/13/2015 7:39:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly, Cheri. I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem, my friend... As you know the Halloween season is one of my favorite times of the year, as well :)
Date: 10/3/2015 6:28:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Etherees are delightful..Sara
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/9/2015 11:00:00 PM
Thank you for your kind congrats and comments, Sara. I appreciate it!... This was my first time writing an etheree and I really enjoyed the challenge :)
Date: 10/3/2015 6:27:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Etherees are delightful..Sara
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Date: 10/3/2015 3:31:00 PM
One of the best poems from one of the best poets...Can't help but wonder who this lucky individual is or do I mis- interpret? Lines five and six along with the last two knocked my socks off...
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/9/2015 10:44:00 PM
You got it right, Tim. This poem was written about someone special, but who he is, is our secret :) I really appreciate your kind comments. Thank you so much, Tim!
Date: 10/2/2015 10:39:00 PM
Kelly, congratulations on your awesome Etheree win. <3 SKAT
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/8/2015 11:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Skat. I appreciate your kind congrats and comments :)
Date: 10/1/2015 11:45:00 PM
Wow, that is just so beautiful! :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/8/2015 11:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Arthur. I really appreciate your comments :)
Date: 10/1/2015 8:26:00 AM
Lovely write Kelly... Congrats on your win
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/7/2015 11:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph :)
Date: 10/1/2015 2:26:00 AM
I just love the "message" in your poem, Kelly! Congrats in my contest.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/6/2015 10:52:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I enjoyed your contest and the challenge of writing an etheree. It was my first time trying this form :)
Date: 10/1/2015 1:58:00 AM
Love the falling in love comparison to the falling leaves . This is quite beautiful Kelly ... Love this little write ! 7 Bev
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/6/2015 10:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, Bev. I appreciate your nice comments... So glad you liked this :)
Date: 9/29/2015 9:32:00 PM
JOY IN THE CATCHING IT WOULD SEEM MY FRIEND. Enjoyed reading this fine poem.. A7
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/6/2015 10:25:00 PM
So glad you did, my friend. Thank you for the nice comments :)
Date: 9/29/2015 12:35:00 PM
- Beautiful poem, Kelly ..... love the end! - Every time I read a Etheree poem, I will like to try one ..... soon ..... soooon .... but not today :))) - Luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/3/2015 11:59:00 PM
I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem, Anne-Lise... This was my first time writing an etheree. It was challenging, but I think it turned out well. I hope you will give the form a try soon!... Hugs :)
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