Get Your Premium Membership

A Bit of Heaven

Here in summer’s languor, no words could ever tell Beholding beauty such as this, would cause the tongue to swell Where the slopes of other valleys, or longing lakes afar The heart feels quiet sympathy, they cannot compare as well So overcome with majesty, and tranquil peaks of snow The stillness of a mirrored lake, unlike I have ever known If heaven could be so beautiful…Dear Lord, please take me now If heaven’s gate, is such as this, I would not hesitate to go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/29/2011 2:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2011 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2011 7:42:00 AM
A beautiful picture of heaven here.Many Congrats Carrie on your big win. Love,gautami
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2011 3:28:00 AM
Your bit of heaven is really heavenly. many congrats Carrie.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2011 7:46:00 PM
You ended our piece with such beauty...congrats on your 1st place. BG
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2011 6:29:00 PM
A classic Carrie, especially those last two lines. Great to see you at the top with this lovely poem, Carrie. Congratulations on your special entry. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2011 6:26:00 PM
Congrad's on your fine verse winning! Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2011 3:25:00 PM
Surely heaven is the most beautiful of all places, but the scene in this photo is how I often imagine it, Carrie. Congratulations on your first-place win. Love and blessings, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2011 12:57:00 PM
Many congrats on being number one, Carrie : )
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2011 12:08:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in John's contest with this perfect poem ... enjoy your top spot with luv.. awesome as always..luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2011 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2011 11:46:00 AM
Mega congratulations on your first place win Carrie (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2011 11:28:00 AM
Excellent. Congrats
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2011 11:14:00 AM
Some of our Earthly beauties must compare to Heaven's or Heaven will be to dazzling to look upon. Congratulations Carrie.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2011 10:44:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Carrie. Many congrats on your FIRST PLACE WIN, Lainie
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2011 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on 1st place win with this beauty. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl
Login to Reply
Date: 4/15/2011 1:03:00 PM
This is so hauntingly beautiful, Carrie! Your imagery is powerful in this poem which I call a Prayer, really. Have a great weekend! Love, Annalise
Login to Reply
Date: 4/15/2011 11:33:00 AM
Wonderful write on the contest photo Carrie!Best wishes---kashinath
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things