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A Beauteous Dawn

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The veil of twilight lifts, unmasking a beautiful spring daybreak. Out came the sun rays bursting through the clouds, shimmering like gloss of silk and satin; sneaking through the window panes. I feel the heat sensation massaging my face. The sun's glow, bright and warm, stealing into my eyes. A beauteous dawn steadily, steadily, steadily ringing a bell outdoors. It sure arrived in style! A spring morn with no hint of rain! I surrender blissfully to the peaceful morning ambiance; easing into a tranquilized mood. How good is the sound of leaves continually rustling in the gentle breeze? How beautiful are marshmallow clouds hovering above me? Or periwinkle blue skies softly kissing lush green trees near and far? The scenery outdoors arresting; good enough to photograph and frame. A fine day, thus far; all the chickadees agree, singing their dulcet songs with glee. Even tulips nod in agreement! The vernal earth smiles at me in dandelions and cherry blossoms, and I return the smile gratefully Date written: 04/18/2018

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Date: 2/8/2023 12:34:00 PM
A beautiful ode to a spring day and how glorious it is to feel spring almost here! Congratulations on your win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/8/2023 7:31:00 PM
Thank you very much, Ann.:-)
Date: 2/7/2023 11:36:00 PM
Ah, you’ve imbibed the totality of what’s offered by nature beauteously in slow motion ~ congrats on your winning write, Edward
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Date: 2/8/2023 7:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Seeker:-)
Date: 2/6/2023 11:36:00 AM
Way to go in Brian's contest. Your name is on the list of winners'. Wave the banner high. Thanks for sharing this work. Sara
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Date: 2/8/2023 7:32:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara:-)
Date: 2/6/2023 6:27:00 AM
Wow. Incredibly lovely Edward! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/6/2023 11:33:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Linda:-)
Date: 6/3/2021 1:34:00 AM
Beautifully sketched.....Congratulations on your win.....Regards, Shonima.
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Date: 6/3/2021 2:36:00 AM
Thank you very much, Shonima:-)
Date: 6/2/2021 4:12:00 PM
Congratulation on your top contest win. You deserve it with a charming penned poem, blessings, and regards. Lasaad
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/2/2021 5:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lasaad:-)
Date: 5/26/2020 3:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your top-notch win, Edward. Such a beautiful poem. Sincerely, ~Elaine
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Date: 5/26/2020 5:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Elaine:-)
Date: 5/26/2020 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful poem and picture. Looks like spring is here. Enjoy your win and day.............
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/26/2020 1:11:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Date: 5/26/2020 1:14:00 AM
Sweetening sweetened sweetly swallowed Wow wonder wonderful wanting Beautiful beauty beautifully Treasure treasured Relished! Bravo!
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Date: 5/26/2020 5:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gideon:-)
Date: 9/29/2018 10:07:00 AM
Beautiful, Edward. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 9/29/2018 1:44:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line!:-) This is one of my poems that got lost in a sea of poems. I decided to resurrect it...

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