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A Beauteous Dawn

The veil of twilight lifts, 
unmasking 
a beautiful spring daybreak. 
Out came the sun rays
bursting through the clouds, 
shimmering like gloss
of silk and satin; 
sneaking through the window panes.
I feel the heat sensation 
massaging my face.
The sun's glow, 
bright and warm, 
stealing into my eyes.
A beauteous dawn
steadily, steadily, steadily
ringing a bell outdoors.  
It sure arrived in style! 
A spring morn with no hint of rain!
I surrender blissfully 
to the peaceful morning ambiance; 
easing into 
a tranquilized mood. 
How good is the sound 
of leaves continually rustling 
in the gentle breeze?
How beautiful 
are marshmallow clouds 
hovering above me? 
Or periwinkle blue skies 
softly kissing lush green trees
near and far? 
The scenery outdoors 
arresting; good enough 
to photograph and frame. 
A fine day, thus far;
all the chickadees agree, 
singing their dulcet songs with glee.
Even tulips nod in agreement! 
The vernal earth 
smiles at me in dandelions 
and cherry blossoms,
and I return the smile 
gratefully


Date written: 04/18/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Peck Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 12:34 PM
A beautiful ode to a spring day and how glorious it is to feel spring almost here! Congratulations on your win!
Ibeh Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 7:31 PM
Thank you very much, Ann.:-)
Seeker Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 11:36 PM
Ah, you’ve imbibed the totality of what’s offered by nature beauteously in slow motion ~ congrats on your winning write, Edward
Ibeh Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 7:31 PM
Thank you so much, Seeker:-)
Kendrick Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 11:36 AM
Way to go in Brian's contest. Your name is on the list of winners'. Wave the banner high. Thanks for sharing this work. Sara
Ibeh Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 7:32 PM
Thank you very much, Sara:-)
Fowler Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 6:27 AM
Wow. Incredibly lovely Edward! Congratulations on your win! :)
Ibeh Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 11:33 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Linda:-)
Burman Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 1:34 AM
Beautifully sketched.....Congratulations on your win.....Regards, Shonima.
Ibeh Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 2:36 AM
Thank you very much, Shonima:-)
Poet Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 4:12 PM
Congratulation on your top contest win. You deserve it with a charming penned poem, blessings, and regards. Lasaad
Ibeh Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 5:01 PM
Thank you so much, Lasaad:-)
George   Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 3:09 PM
Congratulations on your top-notch win, Edward. Such a beautiful poem. Sincerely, ~Elaine
Ibeh Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 5:03 PM
Thank you very much, Elaine:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful poem and picture. Looks like spring is here. Enjoy your win and day.............
Ibeh Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 1:11 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Idudje Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 1:14 AM
Sweetening sweetened sweetly swallowed Wow wonder wonderful wanting Beautiful beauty beautifully Treasure treasured Relished! Bravo!
Ibeh Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 5:16 AM
Thank you so much, Gideon:-)
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 10:07 AM
Beautiful, Edward. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Ibeh Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Thank you very much, Line!:-) This is one of my poems that got lost in a sea of poems. I decided to resurrect it...
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