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Remembering Willow Pond

Born of winter's snow and gentle spring rain Remembering Willow Pond, where our dreams begin Where wild geese swim, then fly away again Beneath shaded coves, where other lovers have been The fragrant smell of earth, green moss and peat Where tangled grass and weeping willows lean A crumbling bank, where cattails wash their feet Our blanket spread upon the meadow green Our campfire glows, playing flirting games Ashes drift like feathers, smoke curls into the air Burning embers, teasing flickering flames And love smolders warm, a kiss in the evening fair Trees sway and swoon along the bank Leaves flutter in gentle evening wind With each breath of warm summer breeze It brushes my cheek, as daylight ends Willow pond, the place where love came alive We loved....under the stars of the twilight skies ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Water/Earth/Fire/Wind For Barbara's contest

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Date: 9/14/2010 8:35:00 PM
wow, CArrie, I just love how you did yours here!! where are you? I haven't seen you around? Cngrats on this. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/4/2010 7:37:00 AM
Many congratulations Carrie on your win in Barbara's contest. I so loved this poem the first time I read it. Having read it again, I love it even more >> James
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Date: 9/3/2010 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations for this wonderful win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 9/2/2010 9:06:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your super win in the Elements contest.. wonderful write and win to enjoy..luv..
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Date: 9/2/2010 8:53:00 AM
Willow Pond sounds like it features a bit of everything nature has to offer, Carrie. Thank you for sharing this special place with us. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/2/2010 4:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in Barbara Gorelick's contest "The Four Elements". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 10:26:00 PM
I'm with Barbara's grandson on this. This is beautiful. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/1/2010 10:06:00 PM
Carrie, what can I say..I hope you are as proud of this poem as I am..its going to my favs..my grandson loved this one most of all. Congrats to you...BG
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Date: 8/13/2010 2:08:00 PM
If I was a Trekie, I would say 'Beam this Scot down Scotty' for this is a scene mine eyes have to capture. Good luck in the contest for this dreamy nature picture your words have painted Carrie >> James
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Date: 8/11/2010 7:11:00 PM
A wonderful entry describing all the four elements well penned, carrie. Good luck
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