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Come look come see, do you see what I just did see. The light at the tree, a tiny yet bright light. I did see it, did you see it too. No light just a big old oak tree I did see, you are my crazy little sister of three. Off to bed we must go, I will dream about the light at the big oak tree. The next day we were playing at the big oak tree, I saw a tiny girl run by as she waved at me, did you see her~did you~did you. I did not see a tiny girl run by, I told you~you are crazy. There she is again, did you see her in her pretty red dress. No I did not see her, I told you~you are crazy. My sister left and what did I see, a tiny girl in a pretty red dress. She winked at me and said, tell no one you saw a fairy that lives in this big oak tree. Date Written: 2/16/2023 3 Place Note: Two very young sisters. One sister three years old and one sister six years old. 6. fairy Writing Challenge -F Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 2/22/2023 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being on Constance's winners' list. Way to go. Sara
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 2:55:00 PM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations.My magical "Fairy" was a fun story/write to bring to life. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 2/21/2023 12:35:00 PM
So magical Paula with that wonderful spice of childhood belief in magic and the mysterious. Congratulations on your win. Thank you for the visit into the delightful. Blessings!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 2:53:00 PM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my magical "Fairy" story/write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 2/21/2023 9:26:00 AM
Paula, nice poem and congratulations on your win my Writing Challenge - F Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 2:50:00 PM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win with my "Fairy" story/write. I am glad you enjoyed this one. I enjoyed writing it for your F Words. Thanks for having this contest. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 2/20/2023 6:32:00 PM
Precious and so cleverly written dear Paula. Congratulations on your win! :) Continued blessings in your writings!
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Date: 2/17/2023 7:17:00 PM
Such a wonderful storyline Paula loved the whole story.xoxo
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2023 8:31:00 AM
Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you love my fun "Fairy" story/write. I enjoyed bring it to life. Have a blessed day/weekend...................
Date: 2/17/2023 3:46:00 PM
Great write... So glad you are writing again... Wonderful... prayers have been answered. Hugs... God bless you always... Ann
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2023 8:30:00 AM
Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a blessed day/weekend...................
Date: 2/17/2023 6:34:00 AM
Magical write--aptly done to convey the dreams of two young sisters. Best to you, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/17/2023 1:41:00 PM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your best. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Fairy" story/write. Have a blessed day/weekend...................
Date: 2/17/2023 2:10:00 AM
Paula, where is this magical oak tree? how lovely it would be to see a fairy.....Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/17/2023 1:39:00 PM
Thank You for reading/writing. Tonight, before you go to bed, look outside for the big oak tree. Look for the tiny light in the tree, then look for the little fairy. She is wearing a pretty red dress. Hahaha.... Have a blessed day/weekend...................
Date: 2/17/2023 1:29:00 AM
- A wonderful poem ... of course I saw it too, Paula - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/17/2023 1:27:00 PM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your good luck. I am so glad you saw my tiny fairy.  She is so magical. Hahaha... Have a blessed day/weekend...................
Date: 2/16/2023 8:14:00 PM
The beautiful vision of a tiny fairy delighted me, Paula. Magical! :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/17/2023 1:26:00 PM
Thank You for reading/writing. I am glad my tiny fairy delighted you. She is magical. Have a blessed day/weekend...................
Date: 2/16/2023 7:48:00 PM
We visualize things ! Such magical visions can give us a lot of delight ! I too wish to have a glimpse of that little fairy living on the big oak tree!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/17/2023 11:10:00 AM
Thank You for reading/writing. Tonight, before you go to bed, look out at the big oak tree. When you see the tiny light then look for the little fairy. She will be wearing a pretty red dress. Hahaha.... Have a blessed day/weekend...................
Date: 2/16/2023 7:33:00 PM
Perfection -- for the 'f' word. Delightful and delicious, Paula!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/17/2023 11:06:00 AM
Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my write delightful/delicious Wonderful words to hear. Have a blessed day/weekend...................
Date: 2/16/2023 7:13:00 PM
Paula, such a fantastic work is a delight to read. Your work is made even more beautiful by the wondrous lexicon and metaphors you employ. Win big
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/17/2023 11:04:00 AM
Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found this a delight to read. You made my day. Have a blessed day/weekend...................
Date: 2/16/2023 2:04:00 PM
Children see the magic in most things Paula, imagination perhaps, or all just part of being a child, take your pick, I enjoyed the innocence of your write, all the best for contest, cheers David
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/17/2023 11:02:00 AM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your best. Children look at the world/things with different eyes. Too bad our eyes grow up. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a blessed day/weekend...................
Date: 2/16/2023 12:53:00 PM
With the heart of a child you write! The poetry world will believe you ;)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/17/2023 10:59:00 AM
Thank You for reading/writing and for your kind words. My heart has a smile on it. Have a blessed day/weekend...................

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