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The light that dances will enchant the eyes that shine In heaven's grace the stars illuminate God's eternity She cannot touch them with her fingertips they are too far away What wondrous glory fills her with desire's joy at infinity's song Heaven's beauty ever caresses her temple as eternity now displayed This wonderful heavenly experience, later that of damasked happiness Sing love's song oh lady of the North in hearts most gentle tones A journey through Cosmos gracious and mighty grateful Oceans of love seek the light's dancing grace By the Fjords bank 'neath skies dance of night The tide reaches her quickly, rising with swelling waves And all in tune as grains of the golden sand She is love's brightest star, in passion's light love's shining grace Before the Northern star, in love's embrace a beauteous gem The silence and beauty, enough time to love Truth is deep like the bottom of the sea and far away like the stars 05.03.2018 A Collaboration by : A-L Andresen & Vladislav Raven Thank you : Mike (Unrhymed Couplets )

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Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/18/2018 1:14:00 PM

Wonderful.... Your ink mixes very well together;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2018 1:17:00 PM

- Keith, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - Always a pleasure to see you :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/11/2018 10:39:00 AM

Wonderful collaboration between you both. The title is great and drew me in. A lot of beauty within the lines. Best, SuZ

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/11/2018 12:34:00 PM

- Appreciate your lovely comment, SuZ :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Melissa Tracy

Date: 3/9/2018 8:54:00 AM

Beautiful collaboration you all created here..best wishes to you all :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2018 12:02:00 PM

- Many thanks from both of us, Melissa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/7/2018 9:28:00 PM

Lovely...damasked happiness...perhaps inside and out!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2018 2:51:00 AM

- Many thanks from both of us, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/7/2018 12:38:00 PM

Wondrous collaboration, stunning results! Congratulations to both dearest, Anne-Lise and Vladislav Raven!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2018 12:47:00 PM

- So glad you liked this co-write, my friend - Many thanks for beautiful comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 3/6/2018 3:42:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise , wonderful flow I was flying in the sky reading this write , well done to you both ::))) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2018 2:33:00 AM

- Appreciate your lovely comment, Niall :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/6/2018 12:37:00 PM

Lovely collaboration you too, great work, you should do more...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2018 12:40:00 PM

- Many thanks from both of us, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/6/2018 8:36:00 AM

Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2018 9:34:00 AM

- Thank you, Thank you, Thank you :)))

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/6/2018 1:28:00 AM

Excellent and beautiful poem. Very interesting collaboration. Thanks for sharing it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2018 3:21:00 AM

- Appreciate your lovely comment, Ravi :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/5/2018 8:48:00 PM

A seamless collaboration, and lovely. Viv x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2018 3:21:00 AM

- Many thanks from both of us, Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/5/2018 5:13:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, it was so wonderful to share ink with you on this write. It has been an honour and a pleasure to sing with you, something i have wanted to do for a while. Your pen ever runs gold. This one has to go into my faves. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2018 3:19:00 AM

- Thank you for asking me, Mike :) - Many thanks for your "fav" :) - A joy to honor - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 3/5/2018 4:04:00 PM

Sun, this poem is so dreamy, you all did a fantastic job writing it and it blends beautifully ~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2018 3:17:00 AM

- B. W., many thanks for your visit and comment :) - Always a pleasure to see you :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/5/2018 3:08:00 PM

I could recognize both your styles in this lovely collaboration Anne-Lise and Mike. Kudos to both of you on a fine meeting of the minds! xxoo : )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2018 3:13:00 PM

- Appreciate your lovely comment, Connie :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2018 3:02:00 PM

Interesting collaboration ..Way to go you two. Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2018 3:04:00 PM

- Thank you, Sara :) - Appreciate your lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 3/5/2018 2:28:00 PM

A beautiful poem Anne Lise..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2018 2:31:00 PM

- Many thanks from both of us, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/5/2018 10:14:00 AM

Beautiful poem you two. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2018 11:42:00 AM

- Thank you, Phyllis :) - Appreciate your lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 3/5/2018 8:07:00 AM

Hello Anne-Lise, You and Mike ("Vlad") have done a masterful and wondrous collaboration with your Couplet here. The words and the imagery carry the reader along on a most enchanted journey. Superb Work!! A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2018 8:16:00 AM

- So glad you enjoy this, Gary - Your comment means a lot to me (and Mike) - Many thanks for your "fav" ... happy smile :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/5/2018 7:49:00 AM

Beautiful poem! And a collaboration!? Wonderful work you two. xomo x2

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2018 8:13:00 AM

- Many thanks from both of us, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/5/2018 7:17:00 AM

Anne- Lise, you and Mike have created a true and brilliant gem with this charming beauty. Love the tying of truth, beauty and love with Heavenly stars and the universe! A fav.... and a true gem...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2018 7:24:00 AM

- Both Mike and I greatly appreciate the beautiful words and a "fav", thanks Robert - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 3/5/2018 7:00:00 AM

An awesome imaginative collaboration Ann-Lise!~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2018 7:15:00 AM

- Thank you Cheryl :) - Appreciate your lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)