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- Thoughts 'Tween Stars Embrace and Waters Deep Grace -

The light that dances will enchant the eyes that shine
In heaven's grace the stars illuminate God's eternity

She cannot touch them with her fingertips they are too far away
What wondrous glory fills her with desire's joy at infinity's song

Heaven's beauty ever caresses her temple as eternity now displayed
This wonderful heavenly experience, later that of damasked happiness

Sing love's song oh lady of the North in hearts most gentle tones
A journey through Cosmos gracious and mighty grateful

Oceans of love seek the light's dancing grace 
By the Fjords bank 'neath skies dance of night

The tide reaches her quickly, rising with swelling waves
And all in tune as grains of the golden sand

She is love's brightest star, in passion's light love's shining grace
Before the Northern star, in love's embrace a beauteous gem

The silence and beauty, enough time to love
Truth is deep like the bottom of the sea and far away like the stars












05.03.2018
A Collaboration by : A-L Andresen & Vladislav Raven
Thank you : Mike 
(Unrhymed Couplets )

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2018

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Keith O.J. Hunt Date: 3/18/2018 1:14:00 PM Wonderful.... Your ink mixes very well together;-) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2018 1:17:00 PM - Keith, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - Always a pleasure to see you :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne Delaney Date: 3/11/2018 10:39:00 AM Wonderful collaboration between you both. The title is great and drew me in. A lot of beauty within the lines. Best, SuZ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/11/2018 12:34:00 PM - Appreciate your lovely comment, SuZ :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Melissa Tracy Date: 3/9/2018 8:54:00 AM Beautiful collaboration you all created here..best wishes to you all :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/9/2018 12:02:00 PM - Many thanks from both of us, Melissa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/7/2018 9:28:00 PM Lovely...damasked happiness...perhaps inside and out! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2018 2:51:00 AM - Many thanks from both of us, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/7/2018 12:38:00 PM Wondrous collaboration, stunning results! Congratulations to both dearest, Anne-Lise and Vladislav Raven! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/7/2018 12:47:00 PM - So glad you liked this co-write, my friend - Many thanks for beautiful comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith Date: 3/6/2018 12:37:00 PM Lovely collaboration you too, great work, you should do more... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/6/2018 12:40:00 PM - Many thanks from both of us, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/6/2018 8:36:00 AM Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/6/2018 9:34:00 AM - Thank you, Thank you, Thank you :)))

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 3/6/2018 1:28:00 AM Excellent and beautiful poem. Very interesting collaboration. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/6/2018 3:21:00 AM - Appreciate your lovely comment, Ravi :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley Date: 3/5/2018 8:48:00 PM A seamless collaboration, and lovely. Viv x Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/6/2018 3:21:00 AM - Many thanks from both of us, Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven Date: 3/5/2018 5:13:00 PM Hi Anne-Lise, it was so wonderful to share ink with you on this write. It has been an honour and a pleasure to sing with you, something i have wanted to do for a while. Your pen ever runs gold. This one has to go into my faves. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/6/2018 3:19:00 AM - Thank you for asking me, Mike :) - Many thanks for your "fav" :) - A joy to honor - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France Date: 3/5/2018 4:04:00 PM Sun, this poem is so dreamy, you all did a fantastic job writing it and it blends beautifully ~ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/6/2018 3:17:00 AM - B. W., many thanks for your visit and comment :) - Always a pleasure to see you :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/5/2018 3:08:00 PM I could recognize both your styles in this lovely collaboration Anne-Lise and Mike. Kudos to both of you on a fine meeting of the minds! xxoo : ) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2018 3:13:00 PM - Appreciate your lovely comment, Connie :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/5/2018 3:02:00 PM Interesting collaboration ..Way to go you two. Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2018 3:04:00 PM - Thank you, Sara :) - Appreciate your lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One Date: 3/5/2018 2:28:00 PM A beautiful poem Anne Lise.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2018 2:31:00 PM - Many thanks from both of us, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 3/5/2018 10:14:00 AM Beautiful poem you two. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2018 11:42:00 AM - Thank you, Phyllis :) - Appreciate your lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 3/5/2018 8:07:00 AM Hello Anne-Lise, You and Mike ("Vlad") have done a masterful and wondrous collaboration with your Couplet here. The words and the imagery carry the reader along on a most enchanted journey. Superb Work!! A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2018 8:16:00 AM - So glad you enjoy this, Gary - Your comment means a lot to me (and Mike) - Many thanks for your "fav" ... happy smile :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 3/5/2018 7:49:00 AM Beautiful poem! And a collaboration!? Wonderful work you two. xomo x2 Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2018 8:13:00 AM - Many thanks from both of us, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley Date: 3/5/2018 7:17:00 AM Anne- Lise, you and Mike have created a true and brilliant gem with this charming beauty. Love the tying of truth, beauty and love with Heavenly stars and the universe! A fav.... and a true gem... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2018 7:24:00 AM - Both Mike and I greatly appreciate the beautiful words and a "fav", thanks Robert - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman Date: 3/5/2018 7:00:00 AM An awesome imaginative collaboration Ann-Lise!~Che :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2018 7:15:00 AM - Thank you Cheryl :) - Appreciate your lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/5/2018 6:00:00 AM Deep like the ocean..lovely thoughts and imagery..kudos to both Anne-Lise and Vladislav! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2018 6:17:00 AM - Many thanks from both of us, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 3/5/2018 5:22:00 AM Beautiful cowrite...A celestial song of love... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2018 5:24:00 AM - Many thanks from both of us, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/5/2018 2:40:00 AM Well done both, a beautiful collaboration. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2018 2:51:00 AM - Always an honor to share ink with a skilled poet, Tom :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton Date: 3/5/2018 2:23:00 AM Divine.x Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2018 2:49:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Leanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Leanne Lovejoy-Burton Date: 3/5/2018 2:27:00 AM And excellent collaboration.